User talk:MikeBarron/ClearCube

My first draft was rejected as blatant advertising. After reviewing this criterion and also the guidelines for spam, I've rewritten the draft. Areas that I've improved include:

• Neutral point of view
  • twice included references to other vendors of similar products
  • in several places removed descriptive text that might be considered "promoting"
• More encyclopedic
  • distinguished PC blades from server blades
  • defined the term connection broker