User talk:Milena calkowska/sandbox

Jay review's Milena Calkowska

I think the article overall is pretty good, I couldn't really find too much to improve on. Somethings I can suggest is maybe having the lead section a little shorter. It is supposed to show an overview of the whole article, not too sure if you want to have examples in this part. Maybe having them throughout the article would make more sense. Since you just want to talk about the bare minimum in the lead which will just lead the reader to know what the rest of the article is going to be about. Overall, I think this is a great article!