User talk:Mmmaansi/sandbox
This article overall has done a very good job of providing a lot of factual data in order to help viewers learn the crux of women's property rights in India. Although, one point of contention that I have come to see throughout the essay is perhaps when I see the author's voice beginning to slip in, especially when they mention "Women's access to land ownership and inheritance of property has been identified as a key component in achieving economic and social equality, especially for developing economies such as India," but provide no factual basis for this to be a key component. I also personally feel that there could be room created by the author to further work on the "variety of social, economic and historic reasons" which have inhibited the journey to equality. I mention this because it could open up another very interesting pathway for this article and help the audience understand the context behind such a pertaining issue. Otherwise, as mentioned before, the author has a done their research properly and everything from the lead, to their end at least at this point of time gives this article a proper Wikipedia feel, and I look forward to the work in the article!
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