User talk:NDM80

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Hello, NDM80, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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Pace Foods edit

NDM80, thank you for your recent contributions to Wikipedia. I had to revert your recent edits of the Pace Foods article, on the grounds that it made the article into little else than an advertisement. Furthermore, you provided no verifiable references for the text, which reads like it was lifted straight off the company's website. The images you uploaded, however, seemed appropriately tagged and can be kept (though I'm no expert on such matters), but only one was left in the article. Please continue contributing to Wikipedia, ensuring that your contributions meet our contribution standards (see links above for more information). Thanks, and hope to see you around the 'pedia! — Frecklefσσt | Talk 11:50, 30 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I noticed you mostly reverted my revert of your original change. You added some sources, but they are unreliable. Wikipedia requires sources other than from the subject of the article (for example, Pace's own website). Another source was M80, a "social media marketing website", also very unreliable. The language was also highly POV. I rewrote it as best I could to meet Wikipedia's standards, but it really needs better sources. Please feel free to add better references at any time. If you want to discuss any big changes to the article (such as reverting my edit), please discuss it on the article's talk page first. — Frecklefσσt | Talk 15:09, 31 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]