User talk:Navybearcat2/Inuit religion

I will use Google Scholar and NKU's resources to form the basis of my submission. §§§§

Hi Matt, it's Fatima. I think your paragraph is a good start but I am suggesting you to first start by defining or actually presenting the Inuit tribe to the reader. Afterwards, you can go on and explain the roots of their religions and its connection to the Christian faith. After that you can other points presented in your article in a more detailed way. but, for me, these three steps that i gave (presenting the tribe, their religion and its roots, the connection to the Christian faith), will be a great introduction that will ease the reader in very gently and with a good understand of what is at stake. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 96.28.5.139 (talk) 22:33, 21 October 2019 (UTC)