User talk:NovaSnow95/sandbox

Feedback on Draft

Major revisions necessary. There are significant problems with this draft that need to be addressed:

• You need to show how your new sentences will fit in to the already-existing page on Anne Fletcher. You cannot repeat information that is already on that page. You should indicate in your draft where the existing sentences will go by using square brackets: [Existing biographical info about Reville here] Alternately, you could add your sentences directly to the existing page, being careful not to delete any high-quality existing text.
• The page needs at least two high-quality, reliable and independent sources and these sources need to be cited throughout the text.
• The page needs to be formatted according to Wikipedia’s standards: with appropriate headings; separate, short paragraphs; film titles in italics; and links to people and titles that are already in Wikipedia.

Chronophoto (talk) 02:26, 22 February 2016 (UTC)