User talk:Npond/sandbox

I want this text to be bold. <ref> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Be_bold

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The content of this information is good but could use some more detail in a few places (noted in edits in Sandbox). I think this is important information that needs to be added and will be useful to those who read this article. Information provided was objective with good sources and had good flow. Grammar and spelling was good with just a few edits. I think the way this article could be approved the most is by adding more detail to a few sentences throughout just to give it more depth. --Clh1806 (talk) 20:25, 3 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I like the information on here. Sometimes the sentences get a little long and would make more sense if they were rearranged or re-phrased a little. Evagebel (talk) 20:29, 3 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]