User talk:Oliviannlewis
The article I want to edit is Malinda Cramer from my random article analysis. In the first biography paragraph there are multiple errors with the wording of the sentences. They could be rewritten in a more understandable way which corresponds to the order in which the events of this woman's life happened. I could also add a picture I found of her off of google images. I also found a website for the International New Thought Alliance (INTA) which is what Cramer was a founder of. This website would be a good source to add to Malinda Cramer's page. The INTA also lists the other founders of the alliance that are not included on Cramer's Wikipedia page.
proposal feedback
[edit]Thanks for posting your proposal. This is a tough article since many of the sources it currently uses or others that are readily available (via Google, or even Google Scholar) are themselves Divine Science websites or publications, which raises the problem of objectivity (as you suggested in your initial analysis). I don't necessarily want this to become a research project, so editing the writing itself and adding an image might be better. For adding images, check out the WikiEdu training module for guidance.
Alternatively, it might make sense to work on a different article. I notice, for example, that the Storm King Art Center article doesn't have a section on exhibits, which there's plenty of info about on the Center's website. If you're interested in creating something like that, I suggest consulting a model article (Artparks Sculpture Park isn't too bad) for ideas. Maybe you could create a table like the one they have for artists and build in some Wikilinks?
Let me know what you think, and holler if you need any help. -KS (DeerJerky (talk) 15:39, 26 March 2020 (UTC)
Reflection
[edit]To the Storm King Art Center article I added section 6, Current Exhibitions. Originally, I was going to add all of the exhibitions the official Storm King Art Center listed but there were too many and I could not get the table formatted the way I wanted to. The assignment taught me how easy it is to edit on Wikipedia. although I had trouble with the formatting aspect, I was impressed about how easily I could add a section and the program would immediately add it to the table of contents. I do wish there was some way I could enter all of the exhibits at the Storm King Art Center onto the page without having to type each one individually and get it formatted how I wanted.