User talk:PTRK22/sandbox

I heard you collected stamps for fun too! Do you think I should start collecting?? Why did you want to stay in a cold state for college if you've lived here your whole life?

Kellyneurobiology (talk) 19:24, 31 January 2018 (UTC)Kellyneurobiology[reply]

You could put this content on your userpage. The talk page is meant for people to talk to you. MMBiology (talk) 23:36, 3 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

You need formatting, headings, proper reference format, etc. MMBiology (talk) 01:14, 28 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback

@PTRK22, Laurennmichelle97, Kellyneurobiology, and AKMade: Nice start on your draft, but I don't believe it's at a stage yet where feedback would be most valuable. Once you fix your formatting, add section headers, inline references, and links to other articles, let me know, and I can give you more specific feedback.

If you aren’t sure how to add inline references, please revisit the section of the training module beginning on this page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:54, 5 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Secondary Article Review

Hello, I like a lot of your information, it was just a little difficult to read without the section headings and separation. Aside from that, I don't know that the last article sited is a secondary article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wheatona22 (talk • contribs) 01:37, 12 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your comments should be on the talk page for the actual article in mainspace, not here. Also, don't forget to sign your reviews. MMBiology (talk) 02:16, 12 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]