User talk:Paige.erdige/sandbox

Tone

Words like 'therefore' and 'which means' are more appropriate for an essay not an encyclopedic article, please review the tone expected and the tutorials. Make sure you also know how to properly cite in Wikipedia, you have to use the Citation button at the top of the edit source pages to insert citations properly. Bryantlib (talk) 15:10, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

Before making the paragraph 'live'

Remember to work with group members when uploading to the live page to ensure you dont upload the same information. Also consider how you will insert your information into the existing cider page. You may have to break up your sentences or not include everything depending on the information that is already on the page.

Proofread your paragraph before you make your information 'live'.

Before you post make sure one person in your group created a new section on the Cider apple talk page you are uploading to, letting the people watching the page know you are making edits. And also make sure you summarize your final change, when submitting to the live page. If you don't remember how to do these steps, re-watch the tutorial. :)Bryantlib (talk) 15:04, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

Adding information to Cider page

You are inserting information on the Cider page, which is semi-protected, to add your paragraphs to the live page, you will need to have made at least 10 edits. You can do this in several ways. editing in your sandbox or a group member's sandbox, or/and going through and doing the steps in the tutorial all add edits to your username. Basically you change something and hit 'publish changes' it counts as an edit. The little box called 'Notices' on the top right of all the Wikipedia pages tells you when you have made 10 edits. Bryantlib (talk) 15:04, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

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