User talk:Patrice Baldwin

Hi, and welcome to Wikipedia. I've just trimmed a little of your recent addition to Dorothy Heathcote, but hyperbolic descriptions of an article's subject are contrary to the WP:PEACOCK guideline. Her teaching methods have been quite widely written about so it shouldn't be difficult to find a reliable source from which you can describe her methods and explain how effective they are. This would enhance the piece. All the best. --Old Moonraker (talk) 07:02, 11 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hello there, I have the Dorothy Heathcote article on my watchlist and I've just trimmed one of the links you recently added. The National Drama Association link is already present as a reference and so does not need to be given as a separate external link. (In any case, the link was to their front page which in due course will not have Dorothy on it any longer.) In addition, the IDEA page is also currently to their main landing page; in due course if they have a specific page devoted to her it will be necessary to amend the link - for now it's fine as it's still relevant. Do post here (by editing this page as you would an article) if you want to discuss this at all. Best wishes, Kim Dent-Brown ^(Talk) 21:23, 12 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]