User talk:Peter2013/sandbox

If "process" is a summary of your article, it needs to go before the Table of Contents. Also, you probably need to split your article into more than two sections; a good start would be a section called "history".--Hagen76 (talk) 13:43, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Overall, this is good. The numbers on the ratio equations are not tied to the other equations. I would omit them. Also, are there theories that that can predict these ratios from fundamental properties of a given system, such as contact angle, hamaker constant, density, or viscosity? If so, please do include. If you can, upload a higher-resolution jpg of the third figure, or upload a svg file instead. The table is confusing; please redo the layout: change rows to columns (the units in any column should be the same). Hagen76 (talk) 17:55, 29 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]