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Hello, Prettylivewire, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Unfortunately, one or more of the pages you created, such as The State of Oklahoma vs. David Ray Mitchell, may not conform to some of Wikipedia's guidelines, and may soon be deleted.

There's a page about creating articles you may want to read called Your first article. If you are stuck, and looking for help, please come to the New contributors' help page, where experienced Wikipedians can answer any queries you have! Or, you can just type {{helpme}} on this page, and someone will show up shortly to answer your questions. Here are a few other good links for newcomers:

I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your name on talk pages using four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically produce your name and the date. If you have any questions, check out Wikipedia:Questions or ask me on my talk page. Again, welcome! Kevinkor2 (talk) 08:02, 22 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi PrettyLiveWire,
I have read the text you typed for The State of Oklahoma vs. David Ray Mitchell.
You did good work on the text:
  • Everything is spelled correctly;
  • the text is grammatically correct;
  • you have inserted paragraph breaks so that the reader doesn't get lost in a sea of text.
Unfortunately, the information you provided is not verifiable as it stands.
The Wikipedia page on Verifiability says:
To show that it is not original research, all material in Wikipedia articles must be attributable to a reliable published source. ...
Verifiability is one of Wikipedia's core content policies, along with No original research and Neutral point of view. These policies jointly determine the type and quality of material that is acceptable in articles.
Because of this, you need to provide references to newspaper articles, court transcripts, judges decisions, etc. that support the facts you list in the article.
For example, the text states "The Victim says she chose to leave this information out of the courtroom."
If you can find a newspaper article that says this, tell me the newspaper name, the title of the article, and the date the article was published, and I'll help you format a reference that supports the text.
Note: The newspaper article does not have to be online. So if you can go to your local library and find a microfilm version of the newspaper from 1995, we can make a perfectly good reference out of it!
Please continuing editing Wikipedia. I predict we can make creating your first article an enjoyable experience. :)
--Kevinkor2 (talk) 08:02, 22 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The article The State of Oklahoma vs. David Ray Mitchell has been proposed for deletion because of the following concern:

No accessible RS. E.g., previous links in EL section all dead or simply involved a later scandal of the judge. Only cited in-line source was a court "docket" (primary source) listing case history. Written as a WP:RGW? In any event, not notable.

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Please consider improving the article to address the issues raised. Removing {{proposed deletion/dated}} will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and articles for deletion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. – S. Rich (talk) 14:28, 22 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]