User talk:RoeJogan712/Neural network
RoeJogan712/Neural network Peer Review
[edit]Lead
[edit]Your lead does not need any changes, as your addition to the article is very specific.
Tone and Balance
[edit]Your tone is mostly fine, though at certain points it feels like you're trying to convince the reader of the article's argument rather than present the study's findings as neutrally as possible. I'd say take another look at the article addition and try to reexamine your tone.
Sources and References
[edit]Your sources seem reliable, though you need to look through and correct their citations.
Organization
[edit]Your addition to the article is kind of one massive block of text. See if there is any way to shorten or break up your paragraph into two or three paragraphs. Otherwise, the organization is good.
Overall impressions
[edit]It seems you have found some good information to add to this article, you just need to reevaluate the way it's presented. Logan Picunko (talk) 01:37, 20 October 2023 (UTC)