User talk:Rolfsmmj/sandbox

Peer Review

I really liked the addition to the epidemiology section, but think it could use even more information and even more specifics! Where is it most prevalent? How many more men does it affect than women? This is a great start but could definitely be added to and expanded!

As far as other sections of diagnosis and treatment, this is great as well! I thought that this was a great overview, and really outlined the treatment as well as symptoms that may occur to someone when experiencing bronchitis, both chronic and acute. I also felt that it did a good job contributing to a reading level in which the general public could understand.

It was easy to read, and flowed well. I just think it needs more in depth information, specifically in the epidemiology portion!