Overall, the additions you’ve provided for this page are very comprehensive and informative. It was easy for me to follow (despite knowing little knowledge on the topic) and this can best be accredited to how you present information clearly and effectively.
One small note: potentially give other examples of apps aside from Grindr that are popular for MSM to use modern day (if possible) if not, I think the fact that you presented this statistic was very substantial to the point you were trying to make
Finally, just some grammatical notes:
“It is thought that the wearing of bandanas by gay men originated in San Francisco after the Gold Rush, when, because of a shortage of women, men dancing with each other in square dances developed a code wherein the man wearing the blue bandana took the male part in the square dance, and the man wearing the red bandana took the female part (these bandanas were usually worn around the arm or hanging from the belt or in the back pocket of one's jeans).” This sentence is very long, consider making it more concise and condensed.
“It may be seen as a something kinkier” omit the “a”
Ultimately, content wise, your additions are well thought out and add a lot to the existing page, just minor changes. Looks good to me! Mxrlena (talk) 04:53, 11 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
