User talk:Ryanenergy

Hi,

this is my first post, and wanted to ask for a review of what I did on the page "Optimal Energy Joule"

cheers

Ryan Ryanenergy (talk) 14:46, 16 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Ryan I started this article a week ago just to get the Joule into the table of highway capable electric cars in the Electric car article since I regard it as the most practical electrical car that will be produced by 2010. It was my first contribution ever to wikipedia. You've done a great job, and it is much more advanced than my contribution.

You added some info that is not contained in the references, like the technical specifications. Can you reference it?

I said the car would be produced from 2010. You say 2009. What's the latest news? Change my statement to 2009 if you have a strong recent reference, and reference it.

It's great to see someone else taking an interest. Feel free to do whatever you want with the article, add pictures, etc.

From the "cheers" I deduct that you are also South African?

Regards Gerhard

Gcscheepers (talk) 14:34, 18 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Gerhard,

Thanks for the advice, I will do my best to find decent references to back up what I wrote. I actually assisted with the development of the business case of the vehicle, and hence have this info. The problem is, I don't actually have any outside references to this info just yet, but I'll have a look.

I am South African, are you? Really exciting project, and I really hope it gets off the ground!

Please feel free to contribute as much as you like.

Cheers

Ryan

Ryanenergy (talk) 06:58, 20 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]