User talk:SUJR14

Hiya, SUJR14!

Howdy, SUJR14. I'm Theo, your Online Ambassador for the New Media Technology and Communication online Wikipedia course, and I'll be here to help if you run into any problems. I've left a welcome message here that has some useful info, including my email address. Give it a look, and let me know if you need anything! —Theopolisme (talk) 12:30, 15 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, SUJR14. I'm Yjx2ic35 (Conner Baldwin), a Campus Ambassador (in training). While your Jerry Uelsmann is a reasonable Reference, the Duloil reference is only a 6th form student in the UK. You need better sources. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yjx2ic35 (talk • contribs) 20:33, 27 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on your work

Not much development of the original stub.

Among things you need to fix:

Review Wikipedia training content on citation & Reference guidelines
Sections on History and Techniques are lacking sources - attribute all information to sources, please
[edit]See also and [edit]References are not acceptable - please clean up the stub per Wikipedia formatting guidelines
insert hyperlinks to other relevant Wikipedia content, e.g., dodging, burning, Masking, Jerry Uelsmann

Mgantony (talk) 16:47, 4 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback

Insufficient development of content since the last assessment. Please consider adding more content before 5 pm on Mon, 18 Mar. The following content & grammar issues may also need to be resolved:

References do not follow Wikipedia guidelines
Consider adding a "Further Reading" section
Consider hyperlinking the following terms to their respective Wikipedia entries: dodging, burning, toning, enlargers, Lincoln, Calhoun, JPEG, RAW, red-eye removal, Photoshop
Fix grammar: Subject-verb disagreement: "Dodging and Burning is"
Grammar: "Dodging is holds back exposure"
This sentence appears twice in the same article: "Burning is when the image receives more exposure so the image can darken. Just like dodging, burning can be done by hand or by using objects"
Grammar: "Burning is a bit longer process"

Mgantony (talk) 14:35, 17 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Good job!

Nice work on the original stub! Mgantony (talk) 23:26, 25 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

A bowl of strawberries for you!

Nice work on your class project. Mgantony (talk) 23:40, 25 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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