User talk:Shookzj/sandbox
I think so far, the article contains some interesting topics that intrigue a reader. I am guessing your plan is to add what you have created to a previous, already created article. If not, I would advise you to add in a sentence in the introduction explaining what the actual reformatory is.
Mossmh: The formatting looks great and you have good sources and sections along with pictures and it makes me believe that this article was done by a wiki pro. I think the only thing you need now is to add more information to make it bulkier. The more information you add could lead to more pictures and sections for a better overall look of the page. Great job!
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