User talk:Shyrece.C/sandbox

Review from Dr. Becky

Both Bda1993 and Wmelancon provided you with excellent feedback! You have made a significant contribution to this article and I think you can continue to develop it further. Look at the overall organization of information (within and among sections), remove redundancy, be more specific with details supported by peer-reviewed scientific articles, and make a strong connection to the ecological effects. What word choices that generalize and be consistent with formatting. The references could be fixed by using the reflist code between two curly brackets {{}}. Do look into how Wikipedia suggests how you use quotes in the Help:Quotations article. This article has real promise and I am excited to see how you develop it to the next level. I encourage you to look at science journals, such as Fire Ecology and Natural Areas, for additional sources about fire effects on ecosystems. B.J.Carmichael (talk) 21:18, 19 March 2014 (UTC)