User talk:SpaceVarangian/Tyche

Hello Space Varangian!

I think this is where I'm supposed to submit my feedback to?

In reviewing you page I find you're doing great work on Tyche and what you've added to the page is a very well written and in a neutral tone that's perfect for this project. Your lead is a good lead into (no pun intended) Tyche.

I did noticed some of your sources seem to be jumping number wise all over the place and could potentially conflict with the original wiki page you are publishing to. I did also notice your upload of a photograph of the coin Tyche is on but if at all possible, as I know Tyche may not be depicted as much as the other gods and goddesses, adding in more art work of her would be good and create a nice break between all the text and researching.

Your organizational skills are a great strong point in putting together this page! I like the break down of Tyche in theater and mythology and even adding on a mythology section seeing as the public wiki page doesn't have much of one. I would however add that moving forward it might be beneficial to have break apart mythology and theatre or your notes under that section in general as they all blur together and if it wasn't for the quickly added notes, I'd be lost as to what parts they're meant to go into.

Overall great work and you're really expanding upon the wiki page by adding more and it's great to be seeing a minor goddess be given more research and depth to her. As said above you're presenting your writing in a clear neutral tone and is well researched out. Again I would focus on renumbering your sources, breaking apart some of your notes and try to add more images and art work (if at all possible) to her page as there's a large lack of it. RavensandStars (talk) 20:01, 19 November 2021 (UTC)