User talk:Staylor1325/Environmental impact of cannabis cultivation

look at main sandbox for feedback from classmates Staylor1325 (talk) 22:07, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sounds good. However, when you refer to an article, just cite it. Don't say "this article states," etc. Maybe add some more sources to back up a few your claims. (Lyndon Jamison (talk) 22:00, 30 March 2021 (UTC))[reply]

I would like to see a few more sources, and I would do away with the disclaimer about the article you mention. Assert the evidence, don't just say that this article asserts it. Matthewgaar (talk) 22:01, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

You have lots of good information here. I agree with Matt: do away with the disclaimer. You will want to think about two things going forward. First, how do you take this evidence and draw reasonable, fact-based conclusions. Sometimes you overwhelm us with evidence; can you draw more of a narrative from this evidence, especially for the non-expert? Second, you will want to think about organization (sub-headings?) and where this material fits on the page. Do you want a sub-heading on 'energy usage' for example? Think through these issues so that the final page is well-structured. Brendankarch (talk) 18:21, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]