User talk:Sunnygrl
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Hello, Sunnygrl, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:
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I removed your edits because the first two sentences of an article should directly define what it's talking about, without saying "What is a Pleo? Some call it a toy..." etc., though I appreciate your attempt to improve the article. See WP:LEAD for guidelines. Also I removed your addition regarding the appropriate age range because it was speculative and not verifiable. Shalom (Hello • Peace) 15:59, 19 February 2008 (UTC)