User talk:Svp28

Our Lady of Fatima

I see that you reverted all of my additions in this article because you feel that the details are trivial and it reads like a book. I don't necessarily dispute that - I just am not particularly happy with the article the way it is now. I should note that I did not delete the summaries, rather, I moved them around in a more logical order. I don't know how closely you looked at the comparison. Nevertheless, I wanted to try something bold. I wanted to include some information on each of the six successive visions, but summarizing each one would have been a bit of work so I simply included the conversations as Lucia recorded them in her Fourth Memoir. Maybe you're right, maybe that's too much information. But I still like the idea of providing some information on each vision in chronological order. What do you think? How do you think this article should be structured? I am open to any ideas you might have. Albie34423 (talk) 04:17, 19 January 2008 (UTC)