User talk:Tdalgai/Verner Panton

In the Biography section, "second wide" should be corrected to "second wife". In text citations would be helpful. The timeline format in this section is informative, but lengthy. Perhaps consider doing a biography section of his personal life and putting the design content in the Design Work section. The awards received are covered in the Recognition and Awards section, so they can be removed from the Biography section. Instead of describing key points of some of his works, consider adding photos with captions. You have added a ton of content and it is all very well written.Jcappotto (talk) 08:13, 28 February 2021 (UTC)