User talk:Theturtleprincess/tigersandbox

Hello, great work so far! I can tell you put a lot of time researching Tiger. Your grammar and syntax was for the most part perfect with minor spacing corrections. Be sure to cite every quotation, there was one that I saw that did not have a citation but I know you mentioned his book title already just be sure everything is cited to be safe. Second, in my copy edit I removed the first sentence or two where you mentioned his initial disinterest in biology/anthropology because I felt that it was not necessarily needed, but of course it is up to you. Again, good job I feel like I learned a lot from your post. Kaelyn Ramirez (talk) 23:25, 15 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

:Thanks for the feedback! I had mentioned he wasn't interested in biology because in one of his papers, he stressed it so much. I felt if he thought it was important to mention, I should mention it too. I did learn a lot about Dr. Tiger and it was an interesting project. Theturtleprincess (talk) 03:25, 22 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]