User talk:Tim Ross/Reston

This article is written like an advertisement

I have just deleted the "advert" tag that was placed on this article. It is hard for me to see how it can be read in that light. There are only three sentences. One states that it's a Gadsden Co. FL community; the second refers to the number of homes there; and the third indicates the existence of a homeowners' association. My weak grammar leads me to believe that there are exactly two adjectives in the whole article - not the stuff of an advertisement. I will happily respond to anyone who can suggest wording which conveys this meaning in a less advertising way. Tim Ross (talk) 11:59, 3 June 2009 (UTC)