User talk:Tinocolombi
Feedback Gabriela Küng
[edit]Your text is very good. You have a lot of references and you put it always in the text, i like it! The main aspects are written and for me it's a basic information about Onobrychis vicifolia. I can't critisise anything. You have a table with the information about the family, there are some pictures. I'm sorry about the short text, but it's too good to write more. Nice work!
Feedback Helena Rupp
[edit]I find your text as well good and surely I was impressed by all the listed references (although I find it a bit strange to find 9 references on a statement like having lower yields than alfalfa.) I like your taxobox and the pictures you added, but I suggest you to add the name common sainfoin, which you often use in the text in the section synonyms of the taxobox. And maybe the strongest advise is to replace your wikipediausername Tinocolombi in the heading of the taxobox by the name of your crop.
In the section biological,... I don't understand what you mean by regrowth after moving. (what is moved where and why is it moved?) I would really have appreciated an averaged yield indication of common sainfoin - it has to be given in one of the 9 references, no? Lower down I would propose you to write in the first sentence, that it is not as specific to rhizobia as other legumes. When I read this for the first time I asked myself if you refer to special, to me unknown, N2 forms. To enhance biodiversity it is sown in intercropping? Since Wikipedia asks to write understandable for everyone I recommend you to elaborate why the pollination biology leads to a low number of registered cultivars.
Section beneficial aspects... here I was not sure if the O.viciifolia is fed reclusively to cattle or if it is given as addition.
Cultivation...: "Pests and diseases are almost never a serious problem" this sentence triggered my interest to know which pests and diseases sometimes are a serious problem. Together with the drought and frost tolerance an indication of precipitation and temperature limit would be interesting.