User talk:Unified101/sandbox2
This is just a suggestion, but to avoid a run-on sentence you should re-word this sentence "The book depicts a mother duck who discovers that one of her ducklings has gone missing and she frantically leads a search with her other ducklings around the pond asking their neighbor animals if they have seen her duckling." It should be "The book depicts a mother duck who discovers that she is missing one of her ducklings. She frantically leads a search with her other ducklings around the pond, and asks her neighbor animals if they have seen her duckling."
Maybe just line the names to other articles
[edit]Just link the important names in the article on Wikipedia.Katiea32 (talk) 18:16, 17 May 2016 (UTC)
Suggestion
[edit]Your article is great! But the coding seems a little messed up. You may want to fix that up to make it neat. That's all.- NostalgicIntrovert