User talk:Wes97/sandbox

Recommendation for "Controversies" Section of Drafted Article

Hello! I know that this is technically the talk page for your sandbox, but seeing as you are using it to draft an article, I will leave my recommendation here (as there is no better place for it).

I noticed whilst editing the "Controversies" section that the company has repeatedly been raided, and had various members of the company arrested, for insider trading. Instead of organizing the section chronologically then, perhaps you could create an individual header solely detailing the company's controversy relating to insider trading, and follow this with another heading mentioning the alleged purchase by Samsung? I feel this would neatly tie together the two primary controversies that the company has been caught in--but seeing as it is your article and your project, feel free to leave the section in chronological order if you prefer.

Regardless, best of luck on your project!

TheHardestAspectOfCreatingAnAccountIsAlwaysTheUsername (talk) 05:35, 18 May 2019 (UTC)