User talk:Yoyoshii/sandbox

Hiroshi

This is a good start. You will need to make in text citations. You should add links to other WP pages as appropriate. Try to tighten up the writing to make it as clear as possible. Maybe have a colleague not familiar with the topic read it over for clarity. Grade 1.5/2 TomHaffie (talk) 01:09, 11 November 2014 (UTC)