User talk:Zuz wiki/sandbox

Copyediting:

I would like to edit 2 errors on the Sanga, Zimbabwe page.

Muputa tried to drill boreholes in Sanga, but was not very successful.

The comma in this sentence should be removed because commas are not necessary between a main clause and a single subordinate clause.

From the "Villages" section: The villages that make up Sanga community include Chipiro Village, headed by Kraal Head (Sabhuku) Chipiro of the Shava totem; Madhume Village headed by Madhume of the Shava totem, Mukuvari Village headed by Mukuvari of the Shava totem; Bhadharai Village headed by Bhadharai of the Shava totem; Mukutukutu village headed by Mukutukutu of the Shava totem; and Mugumbate Village headed by Mugumbate of the Mbeva totem.

The comma after "Shava totem" should be changed to a semicolon to follow the punctuation scheme of the rest of the list.

Approved. Why don't you go ahead and fix the punctuation for the whole sentence on villages. Each item on the list should be separated by a semicolon, and there should be a comma after each village name. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Josefhoracek (talk • contribs) 18:00, 7 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I will add sources to the Radical (Chinese characters) page. Detailed explanation is in my sandbox. Zuz wiki (talk) 07:49, 12 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Good article. Your sources also look good. Josef Horáček (talk) 13:52, 16 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for adding the sources. There were some minor problems: some sources (Chan) had incomplete references, and the links to sources accessed through a database won't work for most users and should be removed. Josef Horáček (talk) 06:40, 2 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I will create a new lead section for the article [Internet in Belgium]. Zuz wiki (talk) 15:08, 20 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This article is mostly a technical summary of Belgium's ISPs and other statistics on Belgian Internet usage. A major section also goes over government involvement in the Internet and includes information on censorship, monitoring, and actions done over the Internet that are punishable by law. A critical point is that the government is considered to be maintaining freedom of speech on the Internet while still taking legal action against offenses committed on the Internet. There is a whole section dedicated to IPv6 adoption, which unfortunately consists of a single sentence saying "In 2014, Belgium has the world's highest adoption rate of IPv6 connectivity," completely leaving out any explanation for why that fact is relevant.

Zuz wiki (talk) 17:56, 23 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your lead is done. Just post it. Good job. Josef Horáček (talk) 06:43, 2 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]