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Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!

It looks like you made some edits before you put the article into your sandbox. Is that right? I'm mostly noting this here so that we keep track and check the original version when we're grading.

One text issue I saw -- the article talks about an unlucky month, and then says: "Either getting married or moving is recommended." -- I think you mean something like: "Tradition says that people should neither get married nor move to a new home during this time."

Also, you don't need to keep (and won't want to keep....) the headers that were provided by the wikiedu template (lead, body, etc.). Go ahead and pull those out and use the real headers the article needs.

My general take right now is that you're making good progress on this article, so please keep working. Be sure to incorporate feedback from the peer review. You might find it helpful to apply the peer review guide to your own article as you think about where to go next.

You are using some good sources, but each one is only adding a small bit of information. Maybe there are sources out there with more information, or you can dig more deeply into the ones you have?

Kaylea Champion (talk) 06:24, 26 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review & copy-edit from Serena

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Hi. I have peer reviewed your article and left some small edits to the grammar. Just a message to let you know :) Serena Chen 009 (talk) 22:14, 28 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Go Live Approval

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Hi @Zzzzzyfffff:

You are approved to go live with this article. I notice there is some leftover junk at the bottom of the page -- the old template from when the page was blank, etc. Make sure when you do your copy that you don't copy those over.

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:

  1. Final read-through draft.
  2. Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
  3. Two browsers side by side, if you can. Source editing mode ("Code mode"), not visual editor.
  4. Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
  5. Note on article talk page.
  6. Note at the top of your sandbox version.
  7. Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
  8. Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 05:24, 11 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Published!

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I have just published the content about the Gate of the Ghosts in my sandbox live! Zzzzzyfffff (talk) 02:28, 12 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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