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Welcome to the Wikipedia Cleanup project. This project is intended as a resource for Wikipedia Cleanup information and discussion. Cleanup issues that this project covers may include [[wiktionary:wikification|wikification]], spelling, grammar, tone, and sourcing.

Lists of pages requiring cleanup are automatically generated from the {{[[Template:cleanup|cleanup]]}} banners placed on articles. See [[:Category:All pages needing cleanup]] and [[:Category:Cleanup by month]]. Older articles with issues that have not been dealt with in some time may be found at [[Wikipedia:BACKLOG]].

{{resources for collaboration}}

''All'' users are welcome to help in editing or fixing ''any'' page on these lists. Please remember to take the appropriate tag(s) off the page when you have completed cleaning an article. Please also document what you have done on the article's talk page for the reference of other editors.

Information on the cleanup process may be found at [[Wikipedia:Cleanup process]]. Other resources may be found at [[Wikipedia: Cleanup resources]] and [[Wikipedia:Template messages/Cleanup]], for help on posting problems with wikipedia pages, or for you to use as a guide.

As of 08:32, 28 May 2008 (UTC), '''32,036''' articles were tagged for cleanup, or '''1.34%''' of the English Wikipedia's 2,390,485 articles.

==Related Cleanup Pages==

'''General Cleanup Lists:'''
* [[Wikipedia:BACKLOG]]
* [[:Category:All pages needing cleanup]]
* [[:Category:Cleanup by month]]

'''Specific Issue Cleanup Lists:'''
* [[:Category:Articles lacking sources]]
* [[:Category:All articles to be expanded]]
* [[:Category:Articles that need to be wikified]]
* [[:Category:Articles to be merged]]
* [[:Category:Articles with topics of unclear notability]]
* [[:Category:Articles with trivia sections]]
* [[:Category:Orphaned articles]]
* [[:Category:Wikipedia articles needing style editing]]
* [[:Category:Articles that may contain original research]]
* [[:Category:NPOV disputes]]
* [[:Category:Articles with unsourced statements]]

'''Other Wikipedia:Cleanup related projects include:'''
*[[Wikipedia:Unreferenced articles]]

==Volunteer to help Wikipedia:Cleanup==

Due to the massive backlog of listings that have ballooned the Wikipedia:Cleanup lists to include thousands of articles, Wikipedia:Cleanup needs '''your''' help!

Feel free to add your name to the list of volunteers who are actively involved in this project! Adding your name will allow other editors to know that you are actively involved in this project as well as allow for better co-ordination between cleanup editors.

* [[Wikipedia:Cleanup volunteers]] list

==The Wikipedia Cleanup Legacy List==
The manually maintained lists on this page (below) have to an extent been superseded by category lists that are automatically generated from the {{[[Template:cleanup|cleanup]]}} banners placed on articles. See [[:Category:All pages needing cleanup]] and [[:Category:Cleanup by month]].

You may add cleanup requests here as well if you wish (though it is not necessary); see [[Wikipedia:Cleanup process]] for further information. Please only add articles to this list that are unlikely to be fixed without the help of Wikipedia cleanup volunteers. '''''Editors are STRONGLY encouraged to try and perform clean-up themselves before posting articles to this list.''''' Help in cleaning articles on this list is also greatly appreciated.

Please keep in mind that the lists here constitute only a small fraction of the Wikipedia articles tagged as needing cleanup, and they may not always be maintained as new articles are tagged or old articles are fixed. The list is still active through a number of editors who do still regularly try to attend to this list. Assistance and participation of other editors is welcome.

You may report confusing/messy articles below and explain why they need to be cleaned-up ([[grammar]], spelling, [[formatting]], order, copyright issues, confusion, etc.). Be sure to cross post your entry on the article's own discussion page for the references of other editors who may not visit this page. Please do not add articles below simply because they are POV or are lacking sources. Make sure to sign your additions with the following format: <code><nowiki>--~~~~</nowiki></code>.

=2008=
==October==
*[[Diamond Shoal Light]] should have two confusing elements reconciled; the text only covers a short-lived lighthouse of 1891, while the infobox only mentions a 1966–2001 lighthouse. [[User:Chris the speller|Chris the speller]] ([[User talk:Chris the speller|talk]]) 16:11, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
==September==
*[[Sudd]] requires cleanup because it has no sections. [[User:Mathpianist93|Mathpianist93]] ([[User talk:Mathpianist93|talk]]) 03:23, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
* <s>[[Jim Ross Lightfoot]] is very messed up with scattered references and unclear order of subsequent events. [[User:WillowGrove|WillowGrove]] ([[User talk:WillowGrove|talk]]) 04:59, 1 September 2008 (UTC)</s>
* [[%C3%9Cbel_Blatt]] Multiple grammatical errors in character section. I have fixed a portion of it, though it requires more experienced editors and people acquainted with the manga to clarify several discrepancies. [[User:Riwoz|Riwoz]] ([[User talk:Riwoz|talk]]) 01:39, 12 September 2008 (UTC)

==August==
* [[Auditory masking]] is a quite informative article; however, there's lots of unnecessary text scattered throughout the article. e.g. "(Gelfand 2004)." is repeated many times for no reason, and "{{{author}}}, {{{title}}}, [[{{{publisher}}}]], [[{{{date}}}]]" appears in another place. [[Special:Contributions/4.242.147.244|4.242.147.244]] ([[User talk:4.242.147.244|talk]]) 19:29, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
* [[History of Shanghai]] is full of unnecessary details and generalizations that make the article confusing and tedious to read. It needs extensive re-writing. [[User:Winstonho0805|winstonho0805]] ([[User talk:Winstonho0805|talk]]) 07:00, 26 August 2008 (UTC)
* [[David Brudnoy]] just needs some footnoting TLC. Cites are all there. I just don't have time. --[[User:BradPatrick|Brad Patrick]] ([[User talk:BradPatrick|talk]]) 03:57, 26 August 2008 (UTC)
*By some "six degrees of separation" type browsing, I find [[De'ang]] to have a clear case of copy-and-paste content and the like. Could do with a mass perge of copyrighted material etc. [[User:Doktorbuk|doktorb]] <sub>[[User talk:Doktorbuk|words]]</sub><sup>[[Special:Contributions/Doktorbuk|deeds]]</sup> 07:36, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
*[[JaJuan Smith]]. Needs actual information. 24 August 2008
*[[Treasury]], [[The Treasury]] and [[The Treasury (disambiguation)]]. Some rearrangement/merging/repartitioning of entries needed. [[User:Jackiespeel|Jackiespeel]] ([[User talk:Jackiespeel|talk]]) 15:11, 20 August 2008 (UTC)
*[[Server (computing)]] - Confusing definition of the term, followed by other several disorderly definitions as the bulk of the article. There has to be a more encyclopedic way to present the subject. [[User:Kreachure|Kreachure]] ([[User talk:Kreachure|talk]]) 23:18, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
**Upon review of the article, it is suggested that an authority on the subject replace the list of unneeded "Definitions of terms" and replace it with a history of the use of servers.
**Just did some massive cleanup of the definitions, passing on for further review [[User:LaVieEntiere|LaVieEntiere]] ([[User talk:LaVieEntiere|talk]]) 06:47, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
*[[Vasileios Spanoulis]] Page has been hijacked many many times by Spanoulis' fans and i couldn't keep up with all the edits. It has turned into some kind of fanpage.Plus it contains many useless information and details.Page is also very long Lacks NPOV too. Just to tell you that i had to removed links to videos in youtube one of which was called "Vassilis Spanoulis is better than Ricky Rubio and Rudy Fernandez". [[User:Sergiogr|Sergiogr]] ([[User
talk:Sergiogr|talk]]) 11:10, 18 August 2008 (UTC)
* [[Carlo Pavesi]] he died. See other wikipedias --[[User:Jodo|Jodo]] ([[User talk:Jodo|talk]]) 21:31, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
**Added the date of death to description. May need the cause. [[User:Jake sanchard|jake_sanchard]] ([[User talk:Jake sanchard|talk]]) 15:17, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
*[[List of disaster films]] Contains many films which fall outside of this category. List seems to be a list of all films which contain disasters (using a very broad definition) rather than read as a list of films from the [[Disaster film]] genre. Needs much editing. [[User:Deckchair|Deckchair]] ([[User talk:Deckchair|talk]]) 15:11, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
*[[Dominic_Carter]] Article reads like promotion material for Carter's book and career.
*[[Wacky Races ]]-intermittent POV-pushing and little sourcing
*[[Alphabets derived from the Latin]] needs to be reorganized, to be brief. I have discussed other details on the [[Talk:Alphabets derived from the Latin|talk page]]. -[[User:Nameneko|Nameneko]] ([[User talk:Nameneko|talk]]) 02:21, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
*[[WPYA]] - Needs a quick fact checking as the text seems convoluted. The station really had that many callsign changes? --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] ([[User talk:Lendorien|talk]]) 16:44, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
*[[The Football Factory (film)]] - Requires major re-write of the "Plot summary" section, which currently has poor grammar and punctuation, and incomplete/fragment sentences --[[User:Nitroblu|Nitroblu]] ([[User talk:Nitroblu|talk]]) 17:47, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
**Cleaned up the grammar a little bit, still needs more references. <span style="font-family: Garamond;font-weight: bold">[[User:SolBasic|<font color="#660000">'''SOL Basic'''</font>]]</span> 00:26, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
*[[Folk high school]] - The article -- particularly the section on France -- still needs quite a bit of sourcing. Also needs to be fact checked and possibly some text editing for normalization. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] ([[User talk:Lendorien|talk]]) 16:46, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
*[[Ashutosh Tewari]] - Has GAN potential but needs to have more specific information regarding the link between robotic surgery and the subject of the article.--[[User:Nmishra9|Nishant M]] ([[User talk:Nmishra9|talk]]) 10:53, 11 August 2008 (UTC)Nishant M
*[[Miss Nepal 2007]] -- several issues. Edited mainly by people who do not have English as their first language. I think. [[User:Kaiwhakahaere|Kaiwhakahaere]] ([[User talk:Kaiwhakahaere|talk]])

==July==
*[[Anton Abele]], a little help with organising the references.
**Have changed the format of the references so they are now in order and relate to the article text. Have also made various style and grammar and spelling alterations to the text. The article could do with some more references.[[User:IrishPete|IrishPete]] ([[User talk:IrishPete|talk]]) 19:42, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
*[[Vazhithala]], needs to be written more clearly with some geographic context and needs wikification
** Cleaned up grammar, trimmed down unneeded info, added stub tag still in need of a picture and political stats etc [[User:Royall|Royall]] ([[User talk:Royall|talk]]) 14:3619 August 2008
*[[Photoanimation]] This article about [[Ken Burns Effect]]-ish processes needs major reworking. [[User:TMC1221|TMC1221]] ([[User talk:TMC1221|talk]])
*[[Taiyuan]] Cites no references. I corrected some grammar errors, but I'm sure there's stil much to be done. I think that the intro should be expanded, as well. [[User:IceUnshattered|IceUnshattered]] ([[User talk:IceUnshattered|talk]])
* [[West View Park]] has no references, needs to be wikified, and definitely needs copy editing. --[[User:Ultimadesigns|Ultima Designs]] ([[User talk:Ultimadesigns|talk]]) 01:18, 7 July 2008 (UTC)
* [[Science and technology in Canada]] - the second biggest article on wikipedia. --[[User:Allemandtando|Allemandtando]] ([[User talk:Allemandtando|talk]]) 17:42, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
*[[Nuevo Estadio Azul]] has no references, it's uncategorized, and is using bad grammar. [[User:Erik93|Erik93]] ([[User talk:Erik93|talk]]) 04:20, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
*[[Big Stick Diplomacy]] It's high importance, and not much larger than a couple paragraphs. I've already started, but it could use some outside help. [[User:Leonard^Bloom|Leonard]]<sup>([[User talk: Leonard^Bloom|<small>Bloom</small>]])</sup> 21:25, 15 July 2008 (UTC)
*[[Academic disciplines]] is in some major need of revisions. Both in terms of the current bullet format which is making additions to various sections unsymmetrical, as well as major content issues. Currently there are few cited sources, and disciplines of all stripes are being added - including those that do not even have a wiki article. [[User:OpusDiabolus|OpusDiabolus]] ([[User talk:OpusDiabolus|talk]]) 11:17, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
*[[Stereotype]] needs dire work overall, drastically lacking citations, organization, POV, balance of information, and conciseness. Concentrates too much on ethnical discrimination rather than the overall topic itself. Recommended into splitting types of discrimination into sub-articles. [[User:Zanibas|Zanibas]] ([[User talk:Zanibas|talk]]) 07:35, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
*The article on [[The Mars Volta]] has sections (especially those on their various albums) that are a real mess. There are multiple references to dates with no year given; grammar is often horrible; references are most often lacking. Perhaps someone with an overall knowledge of the band's oeuvre might be able to do some work on it. --[[User:StavinChain|StavinChain]] ([[User talk:StavinChain|talk]]) 11:56, 22 July 2008 (UTC)

==June==
*[[Mam'zelle Guillotine]] Plot summary non-encyclopedic in tone and incomplete. [[User:Jackiespeel|Jackiespeel]] ([[User talk:Jackiespeel|talk]]) 13:59, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
*[[Global Energy and Water Cycle Experiment]] – needs copyediting, preferably by an expert in the [[climatology|subject]]. Would also benefit from more explanation of the acronyms (beyond merely what they stand for). [[Special:Contributions/69.140.152.55|69.140.152.55]] ([[User talk:69.140.152.55|talk]]) 02:17, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
*[[Blepharisma]] - Article reads like someone's personal research notes. No citations/references. Needs a lot of work.
*[[Film noir]] - tone tags are removed by editors who don't seem to be familiar with encyclopedic tone. -- [[User:Jeandré du Toit|Jeandré]], 2008-06-13[[User talk:Jeandré du Toit|t]]11:38z
*[[Cristiano Ronaldo]] - its too biased no mention of his personal life --[[Special:Contributions/92.232.184.61|92.232.184.61]] ([[User talk:92.232.184.61|talk]]) 20:58, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
*[[Chettinad Vidyashram]] - The school related article is lacking many citations and large sections are unwikified. Almost no references at ''Achievements section''.--[[User:Kaarkey|Kaarkey]] ([[User talk:Kaarkey|talk]]) 02:09, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
*[[Black theology]] - Needs to be cleaned up and wikified. The citations need to be wikified and the structure is irregular. [[Special:Contributions/140.211.72.241|140.211.72.241]] ([[User talk:140.211.72.241|talk]]) 06:00, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
*[[Graphical representations of two-way-contest opinion polling data from the United States presidential election, 2008]] - Graphs are so outdated that they are no longer relevant. --[[User:Quintin3265|Quintin3265]] ([[User talk:Quintin3265|talk]]) 15:10, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
*[[Phineas and Ferb]] - Someone re-wrote the whole article to lie about the names of the cast, character(s) and title of show, along with one of its taglines

==May==
*[[Persepolis]] - Reads like written by someone who has English as a second language. Needs grammar checking. Lacks sources. Listed since 2006. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] ([[User talk:Lendorien|talk]]) 16:36, 28 May 2008 (UTC)
* [[Notting Hill]] - Seems ok, but refs are a mess and not in proper citation format. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] ([[User talk:Lendorien|talk]]) 15:43, 28 May 2008 (UTC)
* [[Rhyming slang]] could use a good re-write, also some copyediting, grammatical fixes, and general cleanup. Cheers, --[[User:Mizu onna sango15|<font color="red">Mizu onna sango15</font>]]/'''[[User_talk:Mizu onna sango15|<font color="black">水</font><font color="red">女</font><font color="black">珊瑚15</font>]]''' 23:04, 27 May 2008 (UTC).
* [[Web crawler]] - Uses several different forms of citation. Needs to be unified into one style. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] ([[User talk:Lendorien|talk]]) 01:24, 27 May 2008 (UTC)
* [[John_L._Merkt]] I am unfamiliar with particular editing functions and would appreciate assistance in cleaning the article. [[User:R3ap3R.inc|R3ap3R.inc]] ([[User talk:R3ap3R.inc|talk]]) 19:49, 24 May 2008 (UTC)
* [[Chicken 65]] The article has been edited and counter-edited by people wanting to lay claim to its legacy or something.. and one of the references quote is a blogspot.com post.. extremely irrelevant blog.. the dish however is not.. please ask me for help if needed.. in my opinion the whole article should be flushed.. made bare.--[[User:Bijun|Bijun]] ([[User talk:Bijun|talk]]) 17:36, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
* [[Tremulous]] The article is written a lot like a game guide, and needs more sources. [[User:Dracion|<font color="#138808">'''۩ Dracion ۩'''</font> ]] [[User_Talk:Dracion|<font color="#8B0000">✎ ✉</font>]] 11:24, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
* [[Foreign Office]] There is a link-loop on the title of the FCO's predecessor.
:Can this page be divided up - it is 128 k long (it appears). [[User:Jackiespeel|Jackiespeel]] ([[User talk:Jackiespeel|talk]]) 17:21, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
* [[Secretariat (horse)]] Honors and Retirement is not written like an encyclopedia article and needs more citations.
* [[Edward Dunlop]] Character Summary contains false information in the Commands bit. --[[User:Destructo_087|Destructo]]<sup>[[User Talk:Destructo_087|Talk to me]]</sup> 02:34, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
* [[Beatrix_of_the_Netherlands]] Article is entirely unsourced. [[User:PrinceOfCanada|PrinceOfCanada]] ([[User talk:PrinceOfCanada|talk]]) 03:32, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
* [[Jackie_Collins]] Article has been incorrectly sourced from unofficial biographies of the author. I will be editing it over the next few weeks [[User:Twiglet23|Twiglet23]] ([[User talk:Twiglet23|talk]]) 15:58, 1 May 2008 (GMT)
* [[Burlesque (album)]] is not written in an encyclopedic way. [[User:Lunakeet|Lu]][[User talk:Lunakeet|na]][[Special:Contributions/Lunakeet|ke]][[User:Lunakeet/Signhere|et]] 13:40, 7 May 2008 (UTC)
* [[Independent State of Croatia]] has passages which were obviously written by someone whose native language is not English {cf. [[Independent_State_of_Croatia#Tomislav_II_.3F]]). [[Special:Contributions/206.116.20.43|206.116.20.43]] ([[User talk:206.116.20.43|talk]]) 21:17, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
* [[Butcombe]] is full of typos and grammatical errors. &mdash; [[User:Paul G|Paul G]] ([[User talk:Paul G|talk]]) 17:18, 29 May 2008 (UTC)

==April==
* '''[[Rainbow Boys]]''' The Character Summary needs to be edited for grammar and style; it may be easier to entirely rewrite the section with new descriptions. --[[Special:Contributions/75.111.175.177|75.111.175.177]] ([[User talk:75.111.175.177|talk]]) 23:07, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
* '''[[James Lowther, 1st Viscount Ullswater]] The conference links have ceased operating - probably other links to the given site need checking. [[User:Jackiespeel|Jackiespeel]] ([[User talk:Jackiespeel|talk]]) 17:54, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
* '''[[Education in Bulgaria]]''' - It needs to be more organized and wikified. [[User:Splee|Splee]] ([[User talk:Splee|talk]]) 10:02, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
* '''[[Benina International Airport]]''' - The section on the new airport sounds like an advert/news article. It needs to be cleaned. [[User:Jaw101ie|Jaw101ie]] ([[User talk:Jaw101ie|talk]]) 19:01, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
* '''[[World War III]]''' (section) - The premise of the section ''Difficulty in determining a "World War"'' is relevant to the page, but the arguments are confused, and it drifts off the point. Deciding what is meant by "World War" is a pre-requisite to determining what (if any) events will be labelled as "World War III". Perhaps this section should just raise the question and refer to [[World War]], which covers the ground more coherently. [[User:Swiveler|Swiveler]] ([[User talk:Swiveler|talk]]) 06:23, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
*'''[[Jesse Jackson, Jr.]]''' The article is a bit of a mess -- some mis-spelled items, many POV statements, etc. [[User:Pyronite|Pyronite]] ([[User talk:Pyronite|talk]]) 22:13, 24 April 2008 (UTC)

==March==
*[[Delta Upsilon]] - Needs to be completely revised. Contians huge lists of members that need to be prosified (in the style used in [[Alpha Phi Alpha]]. See the talk page for suggestions for cleanup. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] ([[User talk:Lendorien|talk]]) 15:57, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
*[[Chain Reaction (film)]] - This article is not even fully completed. If someone who has seen the movie could clean it up. As it stands the article lacks sources or even a complete plot summary. --[[User:Black Rabite|Black Rabite]] ([[User talk:Black Rabite|talk]]) 10:13 14 March 2008 (UTC)
*[[Forest_School,_Horsham]] - A complete mess. Poorly formatted. Has a broken infobox, needs rewrite and wikifying. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] ([[User talk:Lendorien|talk]]) 14:24, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
*[[Aureal Semiconductor]] - Article has a lot of messy external links. Needs copy editing + sourcing. Structure could use a cleanup. Tagged since 2006. Probably an easy fixer upper. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] ([[User talk:Lendorien|talk]]) 15:17, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
*[[Anna-Maria Ravnopolska-Dean]] - Major rewrite candidate, reads like it is a resume for the artist. --[[User:ScaldingHotSoup|ScaldingHotSoup]] ([[User talk:ScaldingHotSoup|talk]]) 18:53, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

==February==
===February 15-29===
*[[Rights of Man]] - This article is extremely cluttered, needs better segways from section to section, some rewriting and possibly expert attention. Also lacks any sources. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] ([[User talk:Lendorien|talk]]) 16:43, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
*[[Pancharatna Kritis]] - Needs to be rewritten in a more encyclopedic style, wikifying, copy editing, and a lot of work. Contains all of the lyrics of the piece. These need to be removed or moved to wikisource. POV issues as well. No sourcing and orphaned. Desperately in need of attention. I've started work on it, but help needed. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] ([[User talk:Lendorien|talk]]) 00:45, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
*[[Chinatown patterns in North America]] - Completely unsourced, smacks of OR. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] ([[User talk:Lendorien|talk]]) 23:58, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
*[[Identity (social science)]] - large portions are unwikified. May contain copyvio. No intext refs, confusing. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] ([[User talk:Lendorien|talk]]) 23:53, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
*[[Choctaw]] is in need of a "second opinion" in regards to grammar, tone, and logical unity. Any help would be appreciated. [[User:Robfergusonjr|Rob]] ([[User talk:Robfergusonjr|talk]]) 15:07, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
*[[George Seton, 5th Earl of Winton]] is in dire need of help from someone who is familiar with British history. [[User:Travellingcari|Travellingcari]] ([[User talk:Travellingcari|talk]]) 16:49, 21 February 2008 (UTC)
*[[Buddhism]] needs, first of all, reorganizing into a coherent structure. [[User:Gimme_danger]] & I tried a while back, but people kept simply reverting & ignored repeated requests to suggest their own arrangement. I hope people can come in & knock their heads together. Once there's a proper structure I can start seriously trying to address the imbalance in the article. [[User:Peter jackson|Peter jackson]] ([[User talk:Peter jackson|talk]]) 16:00, 19 February 2008 (UTC)
*[[List of current DC Comics publications]] needs updating. [[User:Cubzrule|Cubzrule]] ([[User talk:Cubzrule|talk]]) 09:03, 18 February 2008 (UTC)\

*[[Ben Macpherson]] needs cleaning up and a check of sources a lot of incorrect information

===February 1-15, 2008===
*[[Fabian Nicieza]] needs some condensing. The facts are basically just thrown in and the article reads rather choppily. [[User:Cubzrule|Cubzrule]] ([[User talk:Cubzrule|talk]]) 02:14, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
* [[Göztepe İhsan Kurşunoğlu Anadolu Lisesi]] - there [http://www.google.com/search?q=G%C3%B6ztepe+%C4%B0hsan+Kur%C5%9Funo%C4%9Flu+Anadolu+Lisesi&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&aq=t&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&client=firefox-a are sources] but I don't speak nor read Turkish. [[User:Travellingcari|Travellingcari]] ([[User talk:Travellingcari|talk]]) 21:27, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
*[[2Tm2,3]], appears [http://news.google.com/archivesearch?ie=UTF-8&oe=utf-8&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&client=firefox-a&um=1&tab=wn&q=%222Tm2,3%22 to have received substantial coverage] but I cannot read Polish to add content to this article. [[User:Travellingcari|Travellingcari]] ([[User talk:Travellingcari|talk]]) 04:34, 8 February 2008 (UTC)
*[[Institute of Civil Defence and Disaster Studies]] - Created by a [[WP:COI|representative of the organization]]. (Will hopefully receive response from the organization that the text is indeed under GFDL, so please don't delete the article as a copyright violation, for now.) - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] ([[User talk:Mike Rosoft|talk]]) 17:50, 1 February 2008 (UTC)
*'''[[Wilkes University]]''' I need some major help to cleanup this article. It was progressing well until someone who might be from the university decided to rewrite most of it. It is disorganized and very non-[[WP:NPOV]]. If a small contingent of cleanup editors would go to work on it, along with me, it should not take very long. I have done some work on it, but as I am connected to the university in a student capacity, I may not be able to stay neutral on all topics, as is inherent to human nature. Thank you for your speedy help. If you would please let me know on my [[User talk:Plm209|talk page]]. [[User:Plm209|<b><font color="lime" face="comic sans ms">Plm</font><font color="blue" face="comic sans ms">209</font></b>]]<sup><font color="lime" face="arial bold">([[User talk:Plm209|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Plm209|contribs]])</font></sup> 13:51, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
*[[Hasan Metin]], the bulk of [http://www.google.com/search?q=%22Hasan+Metin%22&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&aq=t&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&client=firefox-a the info] even when you specify [http://www.google.com/search?q=%22Hasan+Metin%22&hl=en&client=firefox-a&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&hs=Uth&lr=lang_en&sa=X&oi=lrtip&ct=restrict&cad=8 English only] are in Turkish so I can make no judge of notability or source. [[User:Travellingcari|Travellingcari]] ([[User talk:Travellingcari|talk]]) 15:39, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
*[[Fairly OddBaby]] needs some work. It is full of bad grammar and written in a bad style. - [[User:JWhitt433|J-Whitt]] ([[User talk:JWhitt433|talk]]) 23:17, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
:*I did a little grammer checking at the start of it, but since I havent the show, someone who has may want to look at its plot [[User:King Bombard|{*TEE DUB*}]] ([[User talk:King Bombard|talk]]) 18:50, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
::* I did a little plot work too, but I only saw up to that part.-[[User:Sakuraluver|Sakuraluver]]([[User talk:Sakuraluver|talk]])
*[[Dragan Radulović]], see the talk page, I've identified some sources but language is an issue. Not sure which language of the former Yugoslavia it is, however. [[User:Travellingcari|Travellingcari]] ([[User talk:Travellingcari|talk]]) 15:48, 19 February 2008 (UTC) for real!!!!!!!!!!!

==January 2008==
*[[Simile]] : too big to be a stub but didn't contain enough information to be a valid encyclopedia article.
*[[Paul Tillich]] - maximally baffling heavy theology that may be OR. Needs stiff editing to make this accessible to the lay reader. [[Special:Contributions/86.145.94.229|86.145.94.229]] ([[User talk:86.145.94.229|talk]]) 04:47, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
*[[Transcendental argument for the non-existence of God]] "Criticisms" section reads like a colloquial forum.
* [[Equivalence principle]] has a section "The equivalence principle and the nature of mass" that needs to be looked at by an expert. There are no citations, the English is poor, and it's lacking in any technical information needed to explain and justify the theory that it's talking about. I'd do it myself, but I've never heard of this theory before and so have no idea where to begin. [[User:Dbutler1986|Dbutler1986]] ([[User talk:Dbutler1986|talk]]) 10:08, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
* [[SGML]] -- This article mainly describes highly specialized aspects of its associated subject. I'm contributing with the article but I would like some help. [[User:Rjgodoy|Rjgodoy]] ([[User talk:Rjgodoy|talk]]) 19:09, 24 January 2008 (UTC)
*[[John Sherman Cooper]] Needs some work w/ style. See talk page. --[[User:Haakonsson|Haakonsson]] ([[User talk:Haakonsson|talk]]) 23:01, 22 January 2008 (UTC)
* [[Aang]] Article has serious MoS problems that have to do with writing about fiction. In addition, recent changes have cluttered the article. [[User:Parent5446|Parent5446]]<sup>([[User talk:Parent5446|Murder me]] for [[Special:Contributions/Parent5446|my actions]])</sup> 02:16, 22 January 2008 (UTC)
*[[Normal number]] - "Agafonov showed an early connection between finite-state machines and normal sequences: every subsequence selected from a normal sequence by a regular language is also normal. In other words, if one runs a finite-state machine on a normal sequence, where the finite-state machine outputs the digit it just read whenever it enters an accepting state, then the sequence it outputs will be normal." See the [[Talk:Normal number#Connection to finite-state machines|talk page]] for why I believe the statement is false as it stands; could somebody check the reference given ("Agafonov 1968") for what it actually says? - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] ([[User talk:Mike Rosoft|talk]]) 19:21, 14 January 2008 (UTC)
*[[:Template:European Union Treaty Scenario]] is broken (at least in Mozilla Firefox); it places the images beyond the right edge of the screen (and as a result you have to scroll the article to the right to see them). - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] ([[User talk:Mike Rosoft|talk]]) 20:59, 28 January 2008 (UTC)

=2007=
==December 2007==
*[[Statistical survey]] - This page is written like class notes.
*[[Mary Anderson (stage actress)]] - A large part of this article is taken word for word from a single source. Although the source is cited, this section should be summarized instead, especially since it is not set off in quotes and is in first person. [[User:CClio333|CClio333]] 04:33, 2 December 2007 (UTC)

*[[The Second Sex]] - The verbosity of this article, particularly the section ''Content of The Second Sex'', makes it very confusing. It appears to be an essay or thesis but is so under-referenced that one cannot tell where the information and commentary is coming from. As a general reader I lack the knowledge base to sort out opinion from quotation from original research.[[User:Trilobitealive|Trilobitealive]] ([[User talk:Trilobitealive|talk]]) 01:41, 26 December 2007 (UTC)
*[[Union College, Tellippalai, Tamil Eelam]] - It's very hard to make sense of this article. [[Special:Contributions/Aecis|<font color="blue">A</font>]][[User:Aecis|<font color="green">ecis</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Aecis|Brievenbus]]</sup> 22:35, 26 December 2007 (UTC)
*[[Mirror TV]] - The article reads like an ad. [[Special:Contributions/Aecis|<font color="blue">A</font>]][[User:Aecis|<font color="green">ecis</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Aecis|Brievenbus]]</sup> 15:16, 30 December 2007 (UTC)
*[[Baldur%27s_Gate:_Dark_Alliance|Baldur's Gate: Dark Alliance]] cleaned up considerably, but the plot is still somewhat messy. [[User:N8mills|N8mills]] ([[User talk:N8mills|talk]]) 11:30, 31 December 2007 (UTC)
*[[Mod (computer gaming)]] There is a massive and unnecessary list. '''<font face="Georgia">[[User:Marlith|<font color="#084C9E">Ma</font><font color="#4682b4">r</font><font color="#6495ED">l</font><font color="#4682b4">i</font><font color="#084C9E">th</font>]]</font>''' 20:11, 4 January 2008 (UTC)

==November 2007==
*Links through [[Special:Linksearch/translate.google.com]] should probably be replaced with direct links. [[:Category:Language icons|Language icons]] should be added after the links instead. Sample change: [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Martin_Benno_Schmidt&diff=prev&oldid=173647063] -- User:Docu
*[[OvBB]] Article needs to reflect the recent domain ownership change. It no longer is under Jonathan Freeman's ownership. (1and1 now owns it.) --[[User:Iyeru42|Iyeru42]] ([[User talk:Iyeru42ass|talk]]) 12:20, 23 November 2007 (UTC)
**Image Caption needs the Project forums link removed, unless you wish to change it to one of the demos. --[[User:Iyeru42|Iyeru42]] ([[User talk:Iyeru42|talk]]) 17:04, 23 November 2007 (UTC)
*[[Falling of Blossoms]] is completely in [[Engrish]]. Needs proper grammar, and all that. [[User:Rogutaan|Rogutaan]] ([[User talk:Rogutaan|talk]]) 01:31, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
**At [[Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Falling of Blossoms|AFD]]. [[User:Cricketgirl|Cricketgirl]] ([[User talk:Cricketgirl|talk]]) 15:57, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
*[[Baldur's Gate: Dark Alliance]] isn't that bad, but still could sound more professional. [[User:Marlith|<b><font color="Green">'''Marlith'''</font></b>]] [[User_Talk:Marlith|<font color="brown"><sup><small>'''T'''</small></sup></font>]]/[[Special:Contributions/Marlith|<font color="brown"><small>'''C'''</small></font>]] 03:38, 16 November 2007 (UTC)
*[[Royal Military College of Canada]] needs cleanup. It used to be a good one but like any University or school article, every student adds it own little piece. It is now hard to read and confusing (i.e. languages, traditions, alumni) and there are a lot of irrelevant chapters (i.e. diversity, collectibles, ethics). Please Help!<br>
*[[Magnetosphere particle motion]] - Article has a discursive conversational physics textbook style, not an encyclopedia article style. It also lacks a proper time and place in order to intro to lead intot he article in a way a layman can understand. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 19:25, 4 November 2007 (UTC)
*[[Businesses and organizations in Second Life]] - The page seems to have become a target for Second Life-related organizations to promote themselves. I have declined to speedily delete the page, as I believe it is salvageable; but it needs a severe pruning. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] ([[User talk:Mike Rosoft|talk]]) 10:44, 30 November 2007 (UTC)

==October 2007==

* Over a long period of time [[User:Sadi Carnot]] created bogus articles containing original research and many links to the editor's personal website and self-published work on pseudoscientific psychology theories. Starting with pages such as [[Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Human chemistry]], the bogus editing is in the process of being fully discovered and removed from Wikipedia. "Sadi Carnot" also had a puppet account: [[User:Wavesmikey]]. Editors with expertise in psychology are needed to review edits made by "Sadi Carnot" to many psychology-related articles.
*[[Austin Creed]] needs more information, the picture needs help being properly licensed, article needs to be wikified. <sup>''(I created the article, and included whatever information I knew about Austin Creed)''</sup> [[User:Tyler_Warren|Tyler Warren]] <sup> ([[User_talk:Tyler_Warren|talk]]/[[Special:Contributions/Tyler_Warren|contribs]]) </sup> 23:41, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
*[[Sean Avery]] - suffers from timeline prose that needs to be removed and reworked. Some tonal issues, sourcing. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 03:03, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
*[[Lehmer's conjecture]] - Unreferenced; not being versed enough in such advanced mathematical topics, I am unble to judge whether or not the article actually makes sense. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 16:03, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
*[[453d Electronic Warfare Squadron]], [[Volleyball in Canada]], [[Axial coding]], [[Abracadabra]], [[Kilrathi War]], [[Michael Patterson (producer)]], [[Erich Rhoemer]], [[Cinta Remaja]], [[Valen tv]]: All have been tagged with cleanup tags for months now, with little or no progress made towards actually improving the articles.--[[User:69.118.235.97|69.118.235.97]] 12:23, 14 October 2007 (UTC)
*[[Sri Viswa Viznana Vidya Adhyatmika Peetham]] is an barely wikified, uncontextualized textdump. [[Special:Contributions/Aecis|<font color="blue">A</font>]][[User:Aecis|<font color="green">ecis</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Aecis|Brievenbus]]</sup> 13:07, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
*[[Tennikoit]] - Unwikified, only reference is the Tennikoit Federation of India. Notability? - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 16:27, 3 October 2007 (UTC
*[[Bio-mechanical model for brow ridge formation]] and [[Spatial model for brow ridge formation]] - articles read like summaries of some research papers; should probably be merged to [[Supraorbital ridge]] in some way. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 11:48, 2 October 2007 (UTC)

==September 2007==
*[[History of baseball in the United States]] - Section on Negro Leagues contains very few facts and doesn't read like an encyclopedia entry at all. Really the whole article needs a major overhaul, almost no references.--[[User:Youjane1|Youjane1]] 14:33, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
*[[Nomad]] - Article needs attention to check accuracy and possibly expand to provide more accurate definition. Also needs sources. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 14:23, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
*[[Sukyo Mahikari]] - Religious article needs thorough cleanup to make encyclopedic. Needs wikification and copy editing for tone and pov issues. Significant sections unsourced. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 14:31, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
*[[Arguments for and against drug prohibition]] - reads like a debate, some arguments are very weak e.g. Needs to be gone over for NPOV. Also contains serious sourcing issues. The article uses three different methods of sourcing. Needs to be converted to footnote intext references for entirety of article. Sections may need to be merged or reorganized. A very messy article. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 19:43, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
*[[Assiti Shards series]] - This article has serious neutrality and OR issues. It needs to be deeply cut, perhaps even a deep revert. Completely lacks sources and has a fancruft tone. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 19:43, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
*[[Lean Construction]] Worded like an advertisement. Deals with a specific construction technique by a limited group of firms. Promotes its superiority. Uses extensive external linking directly to for-profit organizations. [[User:4.230.162.237|4.230.162.237]] 02:51, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
*[[Clinical_depression#Hypomania]] Urgent attention of an expert needed ! I (doctor) consider it factually wrong. Anxiety and panic are mostly not part of hypomania. Hypomania belongs to bipolar disorder not unipolar depression. And more and more. Chaotic written too.--[[User:Jmak|jmak]] 08:23, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
*[[Hidden Mickey]], This is quite possibly the worst article I ever read. It is filled with trivia, unrefernced things,indeed, but almost half asmush as the other one errors and a informal style. [[User:Marlith|<b><font color="Blue">'''Marlith'''</font></b>]] [[User_Talk:Marlith|<font color="orange"><sup><small>'''T'''</small></sup></font>]]/[[Special:Contributions/Marlith|<font color="orange"><small>'''C'''</small></font>]] 16:42, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
*[[Moisture absorber]] - Pooly written (informal style ...), unreferenced. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 10:54, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
*[[Translation]] - Has some readability issues. Also seems to be the subject of an editing skirmish between people who are in the field. The result is an article that reads like a textbook and is not very accessible to the non-expert. [[User:Man but I do not agree anywayIt's So Loud In Here|Man It&#39;s So Loud In Here]] 16:55, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

==August 2007==
===11-31 August, 2007===
*[[Bezant]] Confusing and internal contradictions.
*[[Irish Property Bubble]] - Terribly formatted and very poor writing and content.Referencing could be fixed up as well. [[User:Olockers|Olockers]] 10:30, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Radu Duda, Prince of Hohenzollern-Veringen]] - Allegations of heavily POV and non-nuetrality. May need copy editing for tone and research to provide better balance. Subject of an edit war. Needs to be reviewed. Please see talk page for more details. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 18:41, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Gelou]] - a bit more context needed. Sources lacking. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 14:51, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Banasthali Vidyapith]] - Marked as an article which reads like an advertisement. It's based (with apparent permission) off the school's promotional brochure. Needs tone editing, wikification, cropping and possible expansion to include info usually found in university articles. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 14:51, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Big Brother Australia series 3]] - Needs tone checking and sourcing. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 14:51, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Lalitaditya Muktapida]] - Article is not entirely thematically coherent at the moment. It needs to be reviewed by someone with a background in the subject to straighten things out. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 14:51, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Alan Ladd]] - his filmography is completely unorganised. [[User:Reginmund|Reginmund]] 18:55, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
:Turned filmography into a list, titles still needs to wikified and the list needs to be pruned from non-notable entries as it is pretty long.--[[User:Sus scrofa|Sus scrofa]] 00:35, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Ferry Corsten]] - this is a featured-article calibre dj, but his page seems like it was made either by n00bs or his label. discography is a complete disaster and it lacks focus and background. [[User:DJRaveN4x|DJRaveN4x]] 01:04, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Last Words]] - The article needs to be put into proper sections and some general clean up may also be needed. --[[User:Credema|Credema]] 17:57, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Book 3 (Inheritance trilogy)]] may need to be updated. I had heard that a release date had been released for the third book. I believe it was set for early March, 2008, unless I heard false information.
*[[Campus SuperStar]] is too long. Too many information thrown in on the article which are not required. Please post discussion on talk page before any major cleanup is done.[[User:Cocoma|Cocoma]] 22:21, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Project SuperStar]] is too long. Too many information thrown in on the article which are not required. [[User:Cocoma|Cocoma]] 22:32, 13 August 2007 (UTC)

===1-10 August, 2007===
* [[2 Wheels of Enterprise]] needs a lot of work. It lacks wikilinking; the section titles do not conform to general practice; the sections are too brief. I don't have time to tackle it, but hopefully somebody can get it into shape. --[[User:Moonriddengirl|Moonriddengirl]] 13:32, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
* [[Muhammad Zia-ul-Haq]] grammar, repeated sentences, sections read like it was written by some teenager unfamiliar with the language. As the general's place in Pakistani history is important, I would like someone with academic knowledge to review, since the article has changed since the last time I read it. [[User :Mac|Mac]]
:*This looks ok now, I have done a little editing and removed some of the bias.--[[User:Sfrantzman|Seth J. Frantzman]] 13:50, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Abduction phenomenon]] is a godawful mess; see [[Talk:Abduction phenomenon#Numerous massive problems]] [[User:Eleland|Eleland]] 04:27, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Jealousy]] is based upon an inaccurate/limited definition of the word "jealousy." Does not cover any of the other meanings of the word beyond that in a romantic context. Includes poorly organized, non-encylopaedic content. Entire 3rd paragraph is such high-level summary that it reads like a elementary school project - was worse than useless, far below the quality I've come to expect from Wikipedia. Punctuation is poor -I'm sure I could go on, but overall, I felt this was a very disappointing article.
*[[Feminism and the Oedipus complex]] - Messy stylistically; the section on Deutsch reads like it was automatically translated or translated badly, & other sections are haphazard & unclear. All sections need more detail and a generally more thorough, professional treatment to be useful. [[User:PoetrixViridis|PoetrixViridis]] 04:07, 6 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Emmitt Smith]] - completely lacking in important career milestones (such as how the Cowboys acquired him), as well as lacking all but the most basic sense of a historic overview (one game is given its own section, the rest of his career is virtually ignored). --[[User:Badger Drink|Badger Drink]] 19:43, 5 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Uyghur people]] - Sloppily written, with poor grammar and illogical constructions; some sections are written in a juvenile tone; many unsupported statements; general pov [[User:Bacrito|Bacrito]] 15:36, 5 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Big Brother (UK)]] - Article reads like a fan site. Poor grammar, no sources. Just plain low-standards. <span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS,Arial,Tahoma;">[[User:Dalejenkins|Dalejenkins]] | <small>[[Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/The Apprentice (UK)|The Apprentice (UK)'s FA plea-please have your say!]]</small></span> 18:16, 5 August 2007 (UTC)
:*Had a go at this but it's such a huge subject to cover on one page... '''F<span style="font-variant:small-caps">eee</span>lix'''<sup>[[User:Frenicks|Talk!!]]</sup> 12:13, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
:*I had a try at going through bits of the grammar and giving some bits references but it really needs a total rewrite! [[User:Groovychick3291|Groovychick3291]] 20:18, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Digital Entertainment Network]] - Article needs to be broken down, it is currently just a block o text. Grammar needs to be improved. Basically, the whole article needs improvement. --[[User:Credema|Credema]] 03:46, 2 August 2007 (UTC)

==July 2007==

===21-31 July 29, 2007===
*[[Spa bath]] - article could benefit from some copy editing (grammar, style, further wikification) --[[User:Sietse Snel|Sietse]] 16:43, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Deathbowl '98]] - Written so badly that it's nearly incoherent; completely unreferenced
*[[List of colleges and universities in South Carolina]] - Alot of wrong information. some public colleges listed as private. Needs cleanup
*[[Haifa]] - English could be improved, transportation section is too detailed - maybe deserves its own article, academic institution could be better ... etc. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 21:10, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Amedeo Guillet]] needs cleanup by someone familiar with Italian military history. Some text editing, organization and sources needed. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 21:10, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Perpetua]]: An article about an early Christian martyr that mostly just needs some improvements in readability. Sources also needed. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 21:10, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Pallava]]: Organization is poor. English is muddled. There seems to be some original research mixed in there, although that might just be an artifact of poor composition. Probably needs a solid fact-check. [[User:Justin Bacon|Justin Bacon]] 15:57, 8 October 2005 (UTC)
*[[Promotional model]] NeedsSome text editing, wikifying + sources. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 21:10, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Hollard Group]] - Has weird links to non-existent article, POV- seems to be a promo taken from the company literature. [[User:Frankie816|Frankie816]] 14:57, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Center for Talented Youth]] - This is terribly written, it is full of typos and has more fandom than information. It seems like someone wrote the article who did not know how to write, because of that there are no links and bad HTML. [[User:Marlith|Marlith]] 03:35, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Direct-to-video]] - Needs copyediting and sources --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 13:26, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Brian Keenan (musician)]] Needs cats, some research and sources. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 13:26, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Frame of reference]] - very long paragraphs, particularly in the lead. Needs fact checking and sources + probably expert attention. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 13:26, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Nursing Informatics]] - needs copy editing, sources and probably expert attention. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 13:26, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Kshatriya]] - needs extensive editing for grammar, to remove redundancy, and generally to make it encyclopedic. -- [[User:Whateley23|Whateley23]] 20:58, 24 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Cave diving]] - Needs to be completely re-organised. Too much of some info, others are lacking. Lacks proper headings. History section is particularly scrappy ([[User:Ricjl|ricjl]])

===11-20 July, 2007===
*[[Tejano music]] - Needs repair of many links, and several paragraphs are opinionated talk-page like material. --[[User:Whoistheroach|Whoistheroach]] 14:40, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Talking to Dragons]] - Abnormally massive paragraph with potentially useless information.
*[[Steven Pienaar]] - Has been playground for vandals. Somebody with knowledge of subject may be needed to verify current version, which needs work even if completely accurate. [[User:Moonriddengirl|Moonriddengirl]] 13:15, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[phantom voltage]] - Good introduction to this particular term, and is written adequately; however, formatting, citations, and organization need work to be more wiki-ish. Lots of possibly wikify-able terms, aren't. [[User:65.112.197.16|65.112.197.16]] 21:23, 17 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Tucker Max]] - This article has many grammatical errors and is poorly written. The article seems to be biased and makes claims that contradict the sources. 21:47, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
* [[Bassmasters Classic]] - Lack of third-party sources. [[User:Rjgodoy|Rjgodoy]] 08:27, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
* [[Nexus:_The_Kingdom_of_the_Winds]] - This article is poorly organized, badly written, and has a LOT of unnecessary material...[[User:Lneely42|lneely42]]
:* Deleted a LOT of material from this page following the Wikipedia Video Game Article guideline. Also spent some time rewriting several portions of the article correcting grammar, spelling, and poor writing. Some portions I have decided to leave alone for the time being, especially the Controversy section... I think it could be left, but rewritten to be neutral, as the controversy is an integral part of the game... [[User:Lneely42|lneely42]] 06:18, 14 July 2007 (CST)
*[[Sardar Amir Azam]] - De-PoV& wikify. Half of article is unsourced. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 18:59, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[John Tunnard]] - apart from needing wikifying, extremely subjective account that looks like original research. Needs sources and rewrite to cull out tone issues that make it read like a college textbook discussion. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 18:59, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Stingless bee]] - Needs sources. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 18:59, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Hip hop]] & [[Hip hop music]] - Both appear to replicate the content of each other. Hip hop music has two styles of referencing, includes a list of sources, and a limited number of Harvard refs. The article is full of opinion, not neutral and very long. Confused re-directs/merger requests. [[User:Escaper2007|Escaper2007]] 11:18, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Vasileios Spanoulis]] - The formatting of this article is very sloppy and the layout makes for a very confusing read, but it has potential given the amount of quality information about this international [[National Basketball Association|NBA]] player compared to many others. [[User:MichaelProcton|MichaelProcton]] 04:46, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Hanover Shoe Farms]] has a cleanup tag on it but I cannot find the reason why on this page. I made recent edits to it to clean it up but I'm not sure if I fixed the problem. COuld somebody give me a hand? I'm new to wikipedia. [[User:Barn Cat|Barn Cat]] 18:36, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
::I will definitely try to help, but most of the help I can offer is to clean up the language. It currently sounds very stilted. [[User:SeanMon411|Sean Montgomery]] 14:23, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Mitotic inhibitor]] - Recently I have created and expanded the stub 'mitotic inhibitor'. This article is of great importance to cancer treatment and research, but I am very inexperienced in writing for wikipedia and therefore I believe the article needs extensive rewrite, seeing as it does not meet the quality of other wikipedia pages I have seen. I would be grateful if soeone were to help me format the page and expound upon the subject. [[User:Dancanm|Dancanm]] 14:46, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Kentucky-Louisville rivalry]] - Alot of grammatical errors, along with poor layout and spelling. [[User:Kycowboyntv|Kycowboyntv]] 23:51, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Quarantine]] - Based on the 1911 Britanica article, this article is out of date, poorly written (with too much emphasis on the 19th century) and needs sourcing. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 15:57, 12 July 2007 (UTC)

=== 1-10 July, 2007 ===
*[[Strawberry Shortcake]]-Majority of the article is unsourced and probably contains original research and whatever sources are there are questionable. [[User:Storm05|Storm05]] 16:12, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Nihonjinron]] - An article that looks like it's in the middle of major editing but hasn't been edited in almost a month. It has a section named 'Comment to be repositioned' and other stuff that should've been done on the talk page. [[User:Haridan|Haridan]] 07:04, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Pseudo.com]] - Notable internet pioneer firm, however page lacks a lead, a lot of the information is in non-encyclopedic form, and the bulk of the people mentioned are red-links. --[[User:Cerejota|Cerejota]] 03:29, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Keith Olbermann]] - Poorly organized, headings not parallel. [[User:Hobo-nc|Hobo-nc]] 03:26, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Morchella]] - Fairly well written, but omits several very important facts: one being that eating the true morel raw will cause serious gastrointestinal distress and the other being that it must not be confused with the toxic [[False morel]]. [[User:juusan|juusan]] 03:31, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Non-synchronous transmissions]] - Article needs serious improvements. It repeats information, it has no illustrations to explain the text, and it is written in an unencyclopedic manner. It also promotes the American Trucker Association, & Professional Truck Driver's Association school at the Houston Community College N.E. campus in northeast Houston, TX (USA)! Why? — [[User:CZmarlin|CZmarlin]] 02:26, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Ranger's Apprentice (series)]] - A large amount of spelling and grammatical errors. Way to many for me to fix on my own. The content at parts can also sound very unprofessional
*[[Bob Clampett]] - very subjective text in the lower sections - e.g. he wrote some of the 'most outrageuous and funniest cartoons'.
*[[Focus III]] - this reads like a review, and is incredibly positively biased.
*[[Edith Pringle]]: Aussie pol activist. Needs sourcing. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 16:48, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Mii (Jungle de Ikou!)]] - This article is about a cartoon featuring a ten year old girl with large breasts. The writers of this article do not deserve good faith; the depraved tone is hideously unencyclopedic. [[User:A gx7|A gx7]] 02:49, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Fay B. Kaigler Children's Book Festival]] - Seems to me someone just typed it straight from a book or typed it. Considered deletion tag, but I think it's salvageable. Wikified a bit of it and added categories, but it's massive. [[User:Hourick|Hourick]] 22:15, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Akatsuki (Naruto)]] - A former GA article that was demoted due to too much in-universe material and a large amount of trivia. [[User:Artist Formerly Known As Whocares]] 19:40 (Eastern Standard Time), 3 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Shuriken School]] - It has little information, has no illustrations, and is written in an unencyclopedic manner. It needs some serious improving. [[User:Thomasyen|Thomas Yen]] 16:32, 2 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Ranger's Apprentice (series)]] - A large amount of spelling and grammatical errors. Way to many for me to fix on my own. The content at parts can also sound very unprofessional. [[User:Scabloo|Scabloo]] 04:23, 2 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Knights of the Dinner Table]] - Character bios could possibly be moved to [[Characters from Knights of the Dinner Table]] to make room for info about the publication itself. Also needs sourcing. See talk page. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 16:49, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

==June 2007==

===21-30 June, 2007===
*[[Dead Rising]] - The characters' section looks like it was just ripped out of a walk through or game guide.
* [[Object composition]] - A new section about '''Aggregation in COM''' was included, which may be confusing or unclear for some readers. [[User:Rjgodoy|Rjgodoy]] 05:37, 29 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Valley_High_School_%28Des_Moines%2C_Iowa%29]] - Lots of <nowiki><br></nowiki> tags, inconsistent formatting. [[User:Bassgoonist|Bassgoonist]] 19:24, 27 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Video CD]] - Large sections contain grammar errors as if parts were machine-translated into English. [[User:67.66.92.222|67.66.92.222]] 19:03, 27 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Lawrence Dimick]] - This article is clumsily written, with halting grammar. The headings make it unclear whether the section "fictional biography" is missing entirely (other than the heading itself) or made up of subsections that merely relate the plot of [[Reservoir Dogs]]. The entire article is written with overly basic sentences; this may seem like an odd complaint, but read the article and you'll see what I mean. [[User:Minaker|Minaker]] 06:38, 27 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Louis Briffa]] - Unwikified, possibly copied from somewhere. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 10:07, 27 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Amapola Cabase]] - reads like a promotional, and contains many runon paragraphs with not much sense of order. [[User:Squalk25|Squalk25]] 16:27, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Thompson (band)]] - Doesn't look to be written by native English speaker. Odd grammatical mistakes littered throughout. Also may contain OR and copyright violations. [[User:Milton Stanley|Milton]] 22:19, 23 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Children's street culture]] - From the first sentence to the end section is poorly written, with many off topic and lists too long.[[User:GreaterWikiholic|GreaterWikiholic]] 04:05, 24 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Zbigniew Brzezinski]] - This long article has good content; it needs a serious copyeditor to lift its quality. [[User:Lightwiki|Lightwiki]] 23:56, 22 June 2007 (UTC).
*[[Abdul Baqi Purani]] - almost unreadable; possibly translated from Pakistani. [[User:David.Mestel|David Mestel]]<sup>([[User Talk:David.Mestel|Talk]])</sup> 16:46, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[First-Person Shooter]] - Most of the article is pretty good, but a few sections need a bit of help. [[User:GreaterWikiholic|GreaterWikiholic]] 16:48, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Kumon method]] - Promotional - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 17:33, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Gabe Saporta]] - Unreferenced claims. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 17:38, 22 June 2007 (UTC)

===11-20 June, 2007===
*[[Chiastic_structure]] - Needs one or more good examples, attention from an expert. --[[User:Biggus Dictus|Biggus Dictus]] 19:03, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[HSV SS Group A]] - Needs more wikifying and cleanup from someone who knows his/her cars. [[User:Mvuijlst|Mvuijlst]] 17:47, 18 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Sinitta]] - terrible, terrible article......needs a lot of help--[[User:Paul75|Paul75]] 00:04, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Des'ree]] - Reads like a press release--[[User:Paul75|Paul75]] 00:05, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
* [[Civil War (comic book)]] - The Synopsis section needs cleaning up. It's really long and wordy and disorganized and is just a retelling of it all, and is not encyclopedic. It also needs extensive copyediting. --[[User:Zandperl|zandperl]] 16:47, 16 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[List of Greek companies]] - loaded with lots of non-notables that need pruning out. [[User:Astrovega|Astrovega]] 00:49, 16 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Allan Snyder]] - reads like an award citation and needs citations. [[User:Bakashi10|Bakashi10]] 06:57, 16 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Kyiv-classic]] - Contains no references, and appears to have been written by someone involved with the orchestra, but also appears legitimate based upon Google search. -[[User:FeralDruid|FeralDruid]] 11:10, 16 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Yoshi's Story]] is poorly written with an absoulutely terrible section. [[User:GreaterWikiholic|GreaterWikiholic]] 04:30, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Monoboard]] - Article reads like something made up in school. [[User:Cybermuz|Cybermuz]] 16:09, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[First-person shooter engine]] has a terrible introduction, jargon, lists and is confusing to anyone unfamiliar with the subject. [[User:GreaterWikiholic|GreaterWikiholic]] 04:15, 14 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[The Hobbit (2009 film)]] - very choppy and unclear, quite a lot of both grammar and spelling errors.----[[User:Browsercat|Browsercat]] 04:20, 14 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Álvaro de Soto]] - The coverage of his activity in the Middle East peace process and the "De Soto Report" could be improved. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 10:03, 14 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Qiyamah]] - Treats the subject as fact, instead of as what it is: a religious belief. [[User:Cows fly kites|Cows fly kites]] [[User:Aecis#Cows fly kites|(Aecis)]] [[Wikipedia:Sock puppetry#Segregation and security|<sup>Rule</sup>]]<sup>/</sup>[[Special:Contributions/Cows fly kites|<sup>Contributions</sup>]] 13:20, 13 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Retrotransposon marker]] - Jargon-heavy. Overall, very choppy writing.--[[User:Iknowyourider|Iknowyourider]] 15:53, 13 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[DreamStripper]] - This article sounds like an advertisement and was most probably written by the software's creator. [[User:71.126.181.3|71.126.181.3]] 16:22, 13 June 2007 (UTC)
* [[Gene gun]] - At the very least, the second paragraph of the "Design" section needs a cleanup, possibly a rewrite. --[[User:Iknowyourider|Iknowyourider]] 20:52, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[TV3 (Catalonia)]] This entry has been turned into a perfect clone of the TV3 corporate web site. It seems that Wikipedia has chosen to neuter well-documented public criticism concerning the public debates on TV3 (some of it from highly-placed individuals in Catalonia's Parliamentary Control Commission). Furthermore, the entry has been protected from any further editing except by "Andromeda" (the TV corporation's self-appointed publicist).
*[[Violence Against Women Act]] - I agree with recent posts in talk section that the article need a major revision with an eye toward NPOV. It seems odd to me that the article seems to be almost entirely a criticism of this law. [[User:REL1870|REL1870]] 21:24, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Photovoltaic_module]] - Misplaced and unattributed quotations, and no references cited. This article needs some TLC --[[User:7secondsed|7secondsed]] 22:05, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Ziyarat#India]] - Section is a mess. [[User:Cows fly kites|Cows fly kites]] [[User:Aecis#Cows fly kites|(Aecis)]] [[Wikipedia:Sock puppetry#Segregation and security|<sup>Rule</sup>]]<sup>/</sup>[[Special:Contributions/Cows fly kites|<sup>Contributions</sup>]] 09:57, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Vittoriale degli Italiani]] - This is a first article, might overlook some aspects of formatting, style, NPOV, etc. [[User:Lebanese blond|Lebanese blond]] 19:11, 11 June 2007 (UTC)

===1-10 June, 2007===
*[[Shredderman Rules]] - Parts of the plot are poorly-written. [[User:Groudon199|Groudon199]] 19:25, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Question Mark & the Mysterians]] - Article contains lots of minor editing mistakes, but is also written largely in the first-person active voice. --[[User:Migozared|Migozared]] 03:44, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Ocean's Thirteen]] - This article violates NPOV and needs a serious grammar clean up.
*[[Makam Habib Noh]] - Article reads like a hagiography. [[Special:Contributions/Aecis|<font color="blue">A</font>]][[User:Aecis|<font color="green">ecis</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Aecis|Brievenbus]]</sup> 14:33, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Jean Houston]] "Contributions in perspective" section is written like an essay. [[User:24.25.219.142|24.25.219.142]] 08:32, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Barrow-in-Furness]] Badly written and unreferenced with way too much unnecessary information. Poor compared to similar sized UK settlements. [[User:Kijog|Kijog]] 22:55, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Tholus]], [[Mensa (geology)]], [[Rupes]], [[Macula (planetary geology)]], [[Linea]] - short articles about planetary features, originally proposed for deletion after being moved to Wiktionary; I believe that they could be expanded or merged somewhere. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 11:59, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Cy Young]] &ndash; formatting problems, grammatical/syntactical errors; also, problems with text: poor transitions and chronologically incorrect. --'''<font color="FF0000">[[User:Ksy92003|Ksy92003]]</font>''' <small>([[User talk:Ksy92003|talk]])</small> 01:58, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Parlour music]] - Article is completely unsourced. May need text edits. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 17:09, 6 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Jarboe]] - List of albums needs cleanup. Biographical info was cut as copy vio, but a user readded it claiming to be the artist in question's assistant. It IS copy vio fromt he artist's website. Someone with a bit more knowledge of policy needs to take care of this. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 16:59, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[The Great Doheny]] - Written in an uncyclopedic style.[[User:Crazyvideomaniac|Crazyvideomaniac]] 22:10, 6 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Sandy Cheeks]] - Primarily is written in an in-universe perspective and contains no citations at all. <font color="orange">[[User:Squirepants101|Pants]]</font><sup>[[User talk:Squirepants101|(T)]]</sup> 21:18, 5 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Antitrust]] - "History of antitrust in the United States" section reads as biased, selective, and overly authorial. Needs editing, citations, and general clean-up. This is a major article.--[[User:72.43.165.29|72.43.165.29]] 20:09, 5 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[DuckTales]] - Contains no citations whatsoever.--[[User:Astrovega|Astrovega]] 14:27, 5 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[SWAT Kats]] - No citations.--[[User:Astrovega|Astrovega]] 14:29, 5 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Iraq]] - There are several grammar issues in the first paragraph and beyond. I think this should be considered a major article, and should present itself formally.--[[User:Daltonator|Daltonator]] 02:06, 6 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Yeoman]] - No intro, dictionary like sections, written poorly, could be shortened. Seems more like what you'll find in an entymology dictionary than an encyloclopedia. [[User:GreaterWikiholic|GreaterWikiholic]] 00:05, 5 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Korfball European Bowl]] - It's written in poor English. [[User:Katharineamy|Katharineamy]] 17:12, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
*<s>[[GCSE Astronomy]] - There are grammatical mistakes and the language does not suit an encyclopedia article. Please fix.[[User:Wiki.user|Wiki.user]] 11:43, 3 June 2007 (UTC)</s> [[User:Rincewind42|Rincewind42]] ([[User talk:Rincewind42|talk]]) 11:20, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
*[[Jean-Hippolyte Flandrin]] - It was taken pretty much word for word from the Eleventh edition of the Encyclopædia Britannica, which was published in 1911 (it has since entered the public domain). I understand this edition Encyclopædia is frequently used as a resource, but the style of writing is outdated and is not consistent with the rest of Wikipedia. Even though it appears there have been some changes in the past to make it sound more up-to-date, the content of the article still sounds rather archaic. The article might also need the attention of someone who knows a bit about the artist. --[[User:Neinfraulein|Neinfraulein]] 03:28, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
**I updated the tone of the article, but I'm not much of an art buff. It's probably fine the way it is, but if someone's into art it could use his or her expertise. [[User:Ryright|ryright]] 04:54, 11 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Lauren London]] - The article already has an Unreferenced tag, but could also benefit from a general cleaning up of the Early Life and Career section. [[User:Arrowned|Arrow]] 00:28, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Santa Sangre]] - Tone not encyclopedic--[[User:PhageRules1|PhageRules1]] 20:47, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
:*I fixed most of the grammar and added a spoiler warning, but the article is still very lacking, especially in sources. [[User:JoeyETS|JoeyETS]] 00:57, 2 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Palo Verde Nuclear Generating Station]] - "Safety Concerns" section has a non-working link. Most of the "History" section is uncited, with the only reference to an ISBN number. [[User:69.125.123.179|69.125.123.179]] 12:16, 2 June 2007 (UTC)

==May 2007==
===May 25-31, 2007===
*[[Tom Natsworthy]] - Had a complete rewrite by me but i need someone who knows more to help-needs lots of content addition.--[[User:Camelcast|Camelcast]] 09:14, 31 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Razorback]] - lots of fantastic claims here. Are any of them true? --[[User:Rebent|Rebent]] 06:29, 31 May 2007 (UTC)
::Article reads well enough to me. Issue seems to be lack of references, not messiness. Matt 19:35, 29 June 2007 (UTC).
*[[Pre-qualification]]. Some of the information is incorrect, specifically regarding the social security number not being needed. That is absolutely incorrect.
*[[European Irish]] - Legitimate topic, but seems to have been created as an advertisement for the europeanirish.com website. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 13:45, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Hells Angels]] is really poorly written, controversy aside. There are all sorts of grammatical errors and odd syntaxes. I'd be bold, but I don't know enough abuot the subject to figure out what some of the article is trying to say --[[User:xAlpha|xAlpha]] 23:00, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
:Maybe a "subject matter expert"? What subject would that be? It may just need to be re-written - both the article and talk are a bit out of control.[[User:Lightwiki|Lightwiki]] 01:53, 23 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Timebase correction]] repeats a lot of the same information and is poorly organized.
*[[Multimedia Fusion]] has mostly bad English grammar, there are misspelled words, and it just doesn't look gay.
:*Cleaned up formatting and grammer a bit. Program functionality needs verified. --[[User:Rwalker|Mortal]] 23:57, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[iNiS]] is poorly written, short and has broken links. Hard to read. Needs to look encyclopedic. [[User:GreaterWikiholic|GreaterWikiholic]] 02:17, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Warriors_%28novel_series%29]] - Simply very messy, unprofessional, and biased--[[User:Lefteh|Lefteh]] 01:05, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
::Very fan focused - unencyclopedic character. :: [[User:Kevinalewis|<span style="color: #33C;">Kevinalewis</span>]] : [[User talk:Kevinalewis|<sup style="color:#C90">(Talk Page)</sup>]]/[[User:Kevinalewis/Desk|<sub style="color:#C90">(Desk)</sub>]] 13:34, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
*Plese Protect [[Rodeo]], [[Circus]], and other related articles? Mostly because animal right activists are vandalizing them.--Hailey 20:32, 25 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Alfonso Ribeiro]] Trivia section needs to be integrated into article or removed. [[User:GrooveDog|GrooveDog]] 12:22, 26 May 2007 (UTC)

===May 22-24, 2007===
*[[Royal visits to Australia]] contains incorrect links and confusing third person pronouns such as a ''he'' which can refer to a few people. It's also a long article requiring organization.
:* I added sections and an area for references, however, I haven't read through or improved the content at all. [[User:Sparky2002b|-Sparky]] 11:03, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
*[[Town School, San Francisco]]. Reads poorly, short, mission statement uncyclopedic, it is a stub.[[User:GreaterWikiholic|GreaterWikiholic]] 04:47, 24 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Briarpatch]]. Looks like bits have been cut out. Beyond that, general lack of NPOV, unencyclopedic tone, and, frankly, [[Wikipedia:Patent nonsense|patent nonsense]]. --[[User:Hiddekel|Hiddekel]] 22:23, 24 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Sacramento High School]] contains unencyclopedic lists that may require cleanup.[[User:Rjgodoy|Rjgodoy]] 07:31, 23 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Simon Necronomicon]] Tone changes between it being an ancient book translated in the 1970s, a book written on its own merits in the 1970s, and a hoax version of the Lovecraft Necronomicon written in the 1970s. I thought I could possibly fix it, but it's just too much. Might even want to just delete the nonsense and add it as a footnote to the [[Necronomicon]] page. [[User:69.64.10.249|69.64.10.249]] 14:01, 23 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Filippino Lippi]]: (Renaissance painter) - I'm still relatively new at all this, but it seems to me that this article is completely lacking in references. I would tag it, but am still uncomfortable with taking such liberties. There also seems to me some NPOV violations, given a lack of critical reference in such sentences as this, "His first works greatly resemble those of Botticelli's, but with less sensitivity and subtlety" and "Eventually Lippi's style evolved into a more personal and effective one...." I hope a more experienced editor might have time to take a look and decide if those issues need tagging. --[[User:Moonriddengirl|Moonriddengirl]] 14:12, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
:*Tagged for tone, cleanup and sources --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 20:46, 23 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[KZ 7]] - Needs linking. [[User:Rjgodoy|Rjgodoy]] 05:20, 22 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Crucifixion eclipse]] - Very long, POV --[[User:68.236.38.90|68.236.38.90]] 06:00, 22 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Pontarlier]] - The history bit about aviation seems almost like an auto-translation. Badly written. --[[User:Frokor|Frokor]] 16:12, 22 May 2007 (UTC)
-Cleaned up the grammar a little but still some incoherent phrases that I didn't get.[[User:jtimshel|jtimshel]] 20:34, 30 July 2007

===May 17-21, 2007===
*[[Shekhar Suman]] - Unwikified, with too many POVs and/or may be inaccurate content too. [[User:Quork|Quork]] 14:30, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Sam & Dave]] - In ''dire'' need of help. POV, colloquial writing, poor formatting, makes no attempt to follow standards. --[[User:FuriousFreddy|FuriousFreddy]] 23:54, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Canvey Island]] - Reads like a travel guide. [[Special:Contributions/Aecis|<font color="blue">A</font>]][[User:Aecis|<font color="green">ecis</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Aecis|Brievenbus]]</sup> 23:29, 19 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Sasha and Zamani]] - Improper citation, conflicting information, poorly written. '''-Lott''' 09:08, 18 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Yonatan Netanyahu]] - much of the page is bullet points instead of prose. [[User:129.31.72.52|129.31.72.52]] 14:37, 18 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Pinta]] - Poorly written, no organisation, citation, internal links, or formatting.[[User:Celtic Emperor|Celtic Emperor]] 15:44, 18 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Smooth jazz]] - Numerous Wikipedia policy concerns, including [[WP:RS]], [[WP:V]] and in turn [[WP:N]] as well as [[WP:NPOV]], [[WP:NOR]], [[WP:NOT#DIR]] and [[WP:EL]]. The article though is about a major jazz genre with worldwide radio coverage, and so is notable and in my view, not eligible for [[WP:AFD|AfD]], but notability isn't established in the article due to no citations or references. Also alerted to cleanup taskforce, where detailed information on the articles problems are here: [[Wikipedia:Cleanup Taskforce/Smooth jazz]]. --[[User:Tghe-retford|<b>tghe</b>retford]] <small>([[User talk:Tghe-retford|talk]])</small> 16:10, 18 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Annitya]] - Unwikified, poorly referenced, appears to consist of religious claims stated as a fact. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 20:44, 18 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Richard McKeon]] - There are no citations, and the article is not well written, especially the end.
*[[Gaby Hoffmann]] - The article is incredibly confusing, digressing wildly. - [[User:Echtoran|Echtoran]] <sup>([[User talk:Echtoran|talk]])</sup> 10:52, 17 May 2007 (UTC)

===May 1-15, 2007===
*[[Tonya Kay]] - article reads like a resume or a press release, has an overly detailed list of articles and appearances. [[User:BladeHamilton|Blade]] 05:54, 16 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Alternative hip hop]] - Supplies little fact and much opinion and while it cites its sources for this information, it doesn't read like an encyclopedia entry at all. Does not go into great detail regarding examples, history, etc.
*[[Blue Lagoon Island]] - Unreferenced; unencyclopedic pronouncements. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 19:19, 15 May 2007 (UTC)
:*[[Dolphin Encounters]] - Advertisement, connected to the above. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 12:45, 16 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Lan Mandragoran]] - Article on a character from [[The Wheel of Time]] - the page was really disorganized so I grouped topics, but within each topic the text needs to be changed to flow better. --[[User:Zandperl|zandperl]] 20:37, 15 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[The Buckaroos]] - notable band, but the content seems to be too much promotional. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 08:22, 13 May 2007 (UTC)
:*I did some serious restructuring and removed a lot of promo material. Have tagged for [[WP:LoCE]] to have a look at. [[User:Cricketgirl|Cricketgirl]] 18:55, 13 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[TeleForm]] - I nominated this for deletion as advertising, but it appears to be notable; needs a complete rewrite though. <b>[[User:EliminatorJR|<font color="#330066">Eliminator</font><font color="#FF3333">JR</font>]] [[User talk:EliminatorJR|<font color="#483D8B"><sup>Talk</sup></font>]]</b> 23:31, 13 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Evaluation]] - grammar and formatting both need cleaning up a bit. Some clunky and sweeping statements need tidying up too. [[User:Angry candy|Rob]] 15:04, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
*Contributions by {{user|John leo}} - most pages created by the user need cleanup, possibly merging and/or renaming. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 11:29, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Bobobo-bo Bo-bobo]] and [[Bobobo-bo Bo-bobo (character)]] - These articles are in desperate need of cleanup and I refuse to be the one to do it (I don't have the time nor the patience to handle such jobs). I suggest more than one person tackles these articles (I'm sure the other Bobobo articles need cleanup too) to avoid going insane. // [[User talk:Poetic Decay|<font color="black">'''''Decaimiento'''''</font><font color="purple">'''''Poético'''''</font>]] 00:33, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Tat Tvam Asi]] - The article sounds too religious and needs a bit of de-biasing. [[User: Willie the Walrein|<font color="blue">Willie</font> the <font color="red">Walrein</font>]]-<sup>[[User talk:Willie the Walrein|talk to me]]</sup> 16:45, 7 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[VATSIM]] - Information is not up to date, needs a review [[User:enti342|Enti342]] 09:25, 8 May 2007 (EST)
*[[Logical_framework_approach]] - Formating shabby, hard to read, requires general tidying [[User:Onetwothreesix|Onetwothreesix]] 19:33, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Culture#Belief_systems]] - There's no theme here, making the section disorganized. It covers differences between Eastern and Western culture; Abrahamic religion, Eastern religion and philosophy, folk religion, the American Dream, and marriage. Why this grab bag of topics? -[[User:Kris Schnee|Kris Schnee]] 05:51, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[John Mensah]] - POV fancruft. [[Special:Contributions/Aecis|<font color="blue">A</font>]][[User:Aecis|<font color="green">ecis</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Aecis|Brievenbus]]</sup> 00:08, 6 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Floating timeline]] - A fair bit of information their, but it needs to be more organized and presented in a clearer way. -[[User:Kraw Night|Kraw Night]] 06:15, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

==April 2007==
===April 25 - 30, 2007===
* [[Corporation (university)]] needs a lot of work to get up to standard [[User:130.126.196.123|130.126.196.123]] 00:07, 1 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[List of high schools in Indiana]] Inconsistent honorifics.--[[User:Bedford|Bedford]] 03:43, 30 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Bobby Darin]] article style needs cleaning. There are many redundancies and the language is too informal.
*[[Nicky Wu]] - Reads like a record company promo. [[Special:Contributions/Aecis|<font color="blue">A</font>]][[User:Aecis|<font color="green">ecis</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Aecis|Brievenbus]]</sup> 01:09, 28 April 2007 (UTC)
:*Did some stuff. Still needs referencing. Filmography needs roles filled in. -- '''[[User:Shoejar|Shoejar]]'''<sup>''[[User talk:Shoejar|talk]]/[[Special:Contributions/Shoejar|edits]]''</sup> <small>02:50, 28 April 2007 (UTC)</small>
*[[Cambridge Centre]]- I tagged this article since some users see that this article should be deleted. Rather than deleting the whole article, it should be cleaned up and expanded. [[User:Sasquatch4510|Sasquatch4510]] 12:52, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Dumarsais Simeus]] - There is a great to-do list on the talk page. [[User:Nswinton|Nswinton]] 21:09, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Ballachulish]] - Needs serious wikification. Lots of dead links. [[User:Nswinton|Nswinton]] 21:35, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Eternit]] - unreferenced stub [[User:Nswinton|Nswinton]] 21:09, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Freddy's Dead: The Final Nightmare]] - Plot summary could afford to be re-written in less of a junior high tone. Others sections could use expansion. [[User:Nswinton|Nswinton]] 21:09, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Symposium (Plato dialogue)]] - Has been greatly improved, but needs some knowledgeable editor's polish. [[User:Nswinton|Nswinton]] 21:35, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
:*I tried to improve the formatting, but the sidebars are just too big! [[User:Kweeket|Kweeket]] 07:20, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
::*What exactly is the problem with the sidebars? Or has it been fixed? --[[User:Burgercat|Burger]][[User_talk:Burgercat|ca]][[Special:Contributions/Burgercat|t]] 18:25, 28 April 2007 (UTC)
:::*Reduced thumbnail size. That might fix it, it looked fine on my browser though. --[[User:Burgercat|Burger]][[User_talk:Burgercat|ca]][[Special:Contributions/Burgercat|t]] 02:46, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Kurdish calendar]] - Messy, grammar errors, and probably inaccurate information.
*[[Roman Ungern von Sternberg]] the article doesn't site a single reference or source. Definitely needs a clean up. [[User:Olockers|Olockers]] 19:35, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Politics of Ethiopia]] - Most of what is said in the chapter "Political developments" is also said in the chapter "Current politics." This needs to be sorted, probably by merging the two sections. [[Special:Contributions/Aecis|<font color="blue">A</font>]][[User:Aecis|<font color="green">ecis</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Aecis|Brievenbus]]</sup> 22:36, 25 April 2007 (UTC)

===April 24, 2007===
* [[Nexus:_The_Kingdom_of_the_Winds]] - This article is full of inaccuracies, spelling and grammar errors. The users who frequent the talk page can't decide on whether or not to keep the section about corrupt administrators in the game. [[User:Ineedbettername|INBN]] 23:48, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
:* Cleaned up some spelling and grammar errors. --[[User:Burgercat|Burger]][[User_talk:Burgercat|ca]][[Special:Contributions/Burgercat|t]] 10:46, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Cal Madow]] – probably relevant, but currently a SPAM and POV page. [[User:Béka|Béka]] 22:06, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
:*Looks like it may contain copy vio. NOT --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 15:34, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Podiatry]] - The sections on podiatry/chiropody by country need to be wikified, there are some OR issues, and the difference/similarity between podiatry and chiropody need to be made clear. [[User:Cows fly kites|Cows fly kites]] [[User:Aecis#Cows fly kites|(Aecis)]] [[Wikipedia:Sock puppetry#Segregation and security|<sup>Rule</sup>]]<sup>/</sup>[[Special:Contributions/Cows fly kites|<sup>Contributions</sup>]] 12:30, 24 April 2007 (UTC)

===April 17-22, 2007===
*[[Ludovico technique#In popular culture]] Poor grammar, kind of messy. Stuff like that. --[[User:Matthew Proctor|Matthew Proctor]] 23:18, 22 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Ransom_of_King_John_II_of_France]] - This is a real mess currently; it looks like a student's essay pasted in here --[[User:BlackTerror|BlackTerror]] 20:01, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Kasumi Tendo]] terribly wordy, and overwritten. Mostly the work of one individual contributor, but it needs to be NPOV cleared. [[User:President David Palmer|President David Palmer]] 06:27, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Nabiki Tendo]] same as the above. [[User:President David Palmer|President David Palmer]] 06:27, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Tony Romo]] - 2006 Season written very sloppily--[[User:Cdman882|Cdman882]] 04:02, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
:*Cleaned it up a bit - 27 May 2007.
*[[Annobón]] - section on Fauna and Flora has been written very badly. Needs rewriting, prefereably by someone who understands the subject. also this contains profanity[[User:Bazonka|Bazonka]] 16:04, 19 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[France Gall]] - errors in grammar, non-NPOV statements, inappropriate tone at times, confusingly structured, unverified statements. -[[User:Spikedcandy|Spikedcandy]] 16:33, 19 April 2007 (UTC)
:*Have had a go at a major edit of this page, moving around sections as suggested on the Talk page and rewriting poor grammar or poorly written sections.[[User:Faubourgienne|Faubourgienne]] 16:57, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[Anathema]] - Sections repeat material, some material (pop culture) seems of nonencyclopedic nature. → [[User:Aethralis|Aethralis]] 18:00, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Motor oil]] - This article needs help with basic grammar, spelling, proper headings, and encyclopedic tone. [[User:Charles Gaudette|Charles Gaudette]] 10:30, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
:*I have corrected the tense (and other things), but the name issue should still be discussed. '''[[User:Alekjds|Alekjds]]''' <sup>[[User_talk:Alekjds|talk]]</sup> 23:03, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Colin Calderwood]] - Second time I have flagged this - subjective and badly written - sounds like a bad tabloid article - anyone??[[User:Sixfields|Sixfields]] 20:37, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Desposyni]] Article has quotations from primary sources but few secondary sources and references. Most of the content seems to be copied verbatim from a religious group's website. [[User:Ovadyah|Ovadyah]] 23:22, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

===April 13-16, 2007===
*[[Moisture advection]] - Good Number of Problems. Could still use some work --''[[User:The Random Editor|<font color="Navy">Th</font><font color="Purple">e Ra</font><font color="DarkGreen">nd</font><font color="DarkOrange">om</font>]] [[User talk:The Random Editor|<font color="Maroon">Edit</font>]][[User:The Random Editor|<font color="Teal">or</font>]]'' 23:49, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Yamaha XTZ 750]] - Big mess and hard to comprehend. A lot of grammar issues. --[[User:KBi|KBi]] 05:41, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
:*I had a go at this, but it still needs a lot of work and a fresh pair of eyes. It looks to me like the initial work was done by an automatic internet translator, so there may be a copyright issue somewhere here...[[User:Lorangriel|Lorangriel]] 15:29, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
:*Done a little more, but I'm pretty much stuck. I know nothing about this! '''F<span style="font-variant:small-caps">eee</span>lix'''<sup>[[User:Frenicks|Talk!!]]</sup> 12:18, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Channel 4 programming]] is a new article that combines material lifted from [[Channel 4]] (which was becoming too big) and material merged from the former [[List of Channel 4 television programmes]]. It is divided into genres of programming some of which are highly specific with others being vague and mixed-up. It also contains content from many different editors, describing specific programmes individually, which tends to make the prose seem very disjointed. It generally needs a tidier structure, but given the amount of content, is a pretty big endeavour. It is also separately tagged as requiring references. -- [[User:Fursday|Fursday]] 00:02, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Emil Krebs]] - Wall of text that appears to have been translated. [[User:Alksub|Alksub]] 21:57, 14 April 2007 (UTC)
:*Yes, it appears to have been computer-translated from the German WP article.[http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Emil_Krebs [1] [[User:Schmitty120|Schmitty120]] 14:32, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Supernatural]] - This is an important article, but unfortunately it contains many forward claims that require attribution to reliable sources, chief among them a strong support of methodological naturalism in science. It lacks references for many of its other claims, which I have marked with "citation needed" tags. It uses numerous weasel words. "Competing Explanations and Criteria of Preference" as well as the end of "Alleged instances of supernaturalization" have a naturalistic POV and should be cut down unless reliable sources can be found to support their statements. See what I wrote under "Unsourced." Good day.[[User:Schmitty120|Schmitty120]] 19:35, 14 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Lichen sclerosus et atrophicus]] - does not fit the format of a proper medical ailment article. See [[Tuberculosis]] for an example of a proper one. This should be a fairly easy fix as the article is not that long. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 13:38, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Model 1888 Commission Rifle]] - no sources, no sections, and some information is repeated three times throughout the text. Maybe it should also be moved to [[Gewehr 88]], in line with how [[Gewehr 98]] and [[Karabiner 98k]] is named. --[[User:Sus scrofa|Sus scrofa]] 20:48, 13 April 2007 (UTC)

===April 1-12, 2007===
*[[Zakir Hussain (musician)]] - Highly repetitive. Poor formatting.
:*I removed the redundant information...and there was lot of that. [[User:Kweeket|Kweeket]] 23:00, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Los Angeles Southwest College]] - This article reads like a recruitment pamphlet. I think it has some good information but needs to be made a little more NPOV and less shiny. If that makes sense. I added the {{tl|Advert}} template. &mdash;[[User:BassBone|<span style="font-family:font; color:#F00;">Ba</span><span style="font-family:font; color:#C00;">ss</span><span style="font-family:font; color:#900;">B</span><span style="font-family:font; color:#600;">o</span><span style="font-family:font; color:#300;">n</span><span style="font-family:font; color:#000;">e</span>]] ([[User talk:Bassbone|<span style="font-family:font; color:#0F0;">my talk</span>]] · [[Special:Contributions/Bassbone|<span style="font-family:font; color:#0F0;">my contributions</span>]]) 07:57, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Libri Prohibiti]] - Needs to be wikified, have Czech-language names etc. corrected (diacritics), and also restructured - perhaps trimmed a bit. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 17:02, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[North-West Frontier Province]] - The geography section reads like a travel ad, while the history section contains a copypasted lecture. I couldn't retrieve where the lecture ends and the proper article continues. [[Special:Contributions/Aecis|<font color="blue">A</font>]][[User:Aecis|<font color="green">ecis</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Aecis|Brievenbus]]</sup> 22:55, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Australian Survivor]] - Overlong and filled with trivia and POV comments. --[[User:Nick Dowling|Nick Dowling]] 01:58, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Kurali]] - The long paragraph is makes sense at first but then seems poorly thrown together.[[User:KBi|KBi]] 09:30, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Rudolf Bahro]] - Large blocks of text, masses of data thrown into an article. --[[User:Themcman1|themcman1]] 13:58, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[List of characters in Ed, Edd n Eddy]] - The article cannot differentiate between fact and fiction. The only part of the article that does this is the lead. Needs to be rewritten to conform with [[WP:WAF]]. [[User:Squirepants101|Squirepants101]] 20:03, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Template:R_with_possibilities]] -- Wording is difficult to understand; writing style does not match other Wikipedia messages. I know this isn't the [[Simple English]] version of Wikipedia, but this Template is really confusing. --[[User:Hadley|hadley]] 15:33, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Confessions_of_a_Teenage_Drama_Queen]] - stumbled on the site as suggested by SuggestBot for it being a stub, but turns out the plot section is one run-on sentence followed by another. [[User:EvokeNZ|EvokeNZ]] 06:40, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
:*I did what I could for the poor thing. --[[User:The Streetsweeper|The Streetsweeper]] 08:42, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Quality control]] - completely uncited, seems like the bulk of the history is OR/speculation. style issues. over half the text is on quality assurance, which has its own article. (though there is a merge discussion on the two). [[User:Ripe|Ripe]] 15:48, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Strategic planning]] - Needs general cleanup and removal of bias. Has formatting issues throughout, and questionable quality as well. -- [[User:Whereizben|Whereizben]] - [[User_talk:Whereizben|Chat with me]] - [[Special:Contributions/Whereizben|My Contributions]] 12:54, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[ZZZap!]] - Suffers from poorly constructed sentences and dodgy English. Needs some revising for grammar. Content is overly long and covoluted. The As it is, the article is fairly unreadable and massive. I did a little editing, but I'm not really familiar with the show, being American and all.. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 22:15, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Route poisoning]] - Confusing at best - inaccurate at worst. I don't know enough to fix myself, but I know that the author is confusing route poisoning and poison reverse. Someone with expert networking knowledge needs to go over this. [[User:68.85.119.250|68.85.119.250]] 22:46, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Dragon Master]] - Needs wikification, npov, and a rewrite. [[User:Metrackle|Metrackle]] 21:51, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

==March 2007==
===March 21-31, 2007===
*[[History of the Green Party of Canada]] - Introduction needs to be written, source need cleaning up. [[User:GreenJoe|GreenJoe]] 19:33, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Sidux]] - Seems to require cleanup to meet Wikipedia's quality standards. I have made a few changes, please check and correct it. --[[User:77.181.131.58|77.181.131.58]] 11:49, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
:*I took a jab at it. A lot of the work simply required naturalization of the English grammer, so that's done. I can't say anything about the informational content itself. Still needs sourcing. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 17:26, 2 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Rock the Vote]] - Much of the article is straight copy-paste, tenses are mixed, and sections need to be added. -- [[User:Xenoveritas|Xenoveritas]] 15:41, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Conservatism in Canada]] - General cleanup in several areas, including factual accuracy, citations, clarity and organization. [[User:Hipsterlady|Hipsterlady]] 21:47, 27 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Neoconservatism in Canada]] - This article does not adequately cite its references or sources.[[User:Hipsterlady|Hipsterlady]] 21:47, 27 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Ti%C3%ABsto]] - Career section begins well but ends up in a mere listing of sometimes irrelevant events. Furthermore, the end of the section looks really messy. --[[User:Ionstorm|Ionstorm]] 17:53, 26 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Fender_Stratocaster]] - Article begins well but loses organization and the running order jumps around. [[User:penmachine|D. Miller]]
*[[Dolphins-Jets rivalry]] - Lots of information (perhaps too much), but unencyclopedic tone throughout much of the article; too much for me to rewrite on my own. Could use some copyediting too, perhaps. -- [[User:Highway99|Highway99]] 06:30, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[List of Dutch hip hop musicians]] - Needs wikification, npov'ing, etc. [[Special:Contributions/Aecis|<font color="blue">A</font>]][[User:Aecis|<font color="green">ecis</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Aecis|Brievenbus]]</sup> 17:15, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
:*Did some cleanup here, mostly needs sources and organization now. General cleanup would still help. [[User:Nswinton|Nswinton]] 19:53, 12 April 2007 (UTC)
:*Cleaned up somewhat, but may need additional changes. --[[User:DSPoh|DSPoh]] 13:33, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Ronson's Lighters]] - Not much content; loosely organized. I did a bit of copyediting, but this article needs to be revised and expanded. --[[User:DoorsAjar|DoorsAjar]] 08:41, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

*[[Ribesal]] - Real topic, but extremely badly written, unreferenced, and unwikified. -- [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 22:12, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Environmental issues in Ethiopia]] - Good info, but sounds like it's written by a non-native speaker, lots of redundancies and some grammar/spelling errors
:*I cleaned up the sentence structure, spelling and grammar issues for the most part. -- [[User:Nswinton|Nswinton]] 17:03, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

===March 11-20, 2007===
*[[Olivia_%28singer%29]] - Proofreading for typos and general cleanup required, e.g. same facts are stated multiple times in several locations (bio, music career)
*[[Erotic Lactation]] - Article needs general proofreading. Spelling errors, non-words, and some colloquial speech detracting from encyclopedic tone.
:*This still needs more editing. I attempted to make spelling/grammar changes, but short on time and unable to finish it now. I cannot in good conscience recommend leaving the bit about lesbians breastfeeding each other being commonplace. The citation for that bit was dated to 1934: too old for anything current and scholarly. I left it there, though. [[User:Snackar|Snackar]] 09:46, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Sutton High Sports College]] - This article needs proofreading, verified sources and generally, a more encyclopedic tone. --[[User:EscapingLife|EscapingLife]] 21:48, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Noelle Pikus Pace]] - This article is poorly written and from a first person perspective. The person is real and seems notable but the text of the article needs much attention. Sadly more than I hace this morning. [[User:J. Bryant Evans|JBEvans]] 10:55, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Social studies]] - This article needs clean-up, streamlining or a complete rewrite and/or a possible merge? I tried some by correcting spelling but I do not have enough time, interest nor experience to format the layout and content. Also not sure about the validity/nobility of the subject, as it seems to be some sort of set of study hints for students; therefore un-encyclopedic? I also tried to make the layout ''look'' a bit better, it's better ''looking'' but still is a poor article in my opinion. Hopefully someone will look at this to help clean it up, expand it, merge it, or delete it. I did add a stub tag. Dunno :/ -Jeeny 19:01, 17 March 2007 (UTC)
:*I tried to break up the material in the introduction into subsections as well as removing some redundancy and confusing sentence structure. I also rephrased the Digital Technology section to be easier to understand and to sound less like a commercial. I don't know enough about the teaching methods to know what to do with them, but I recommend perhaps just creating a new page or linking to an existing one that covers the method of teaching. The current lists are not very informative and seem more like a brochure than an encyclopedia entry. SPH. 17, March 2007.
*[[General Hospital]] - This article is in need of some basic cleanup and reformatting. If left untended, it will essentially turn into a recap/fansite page. I don't have a problem with posting storyline-type information, but it needs to be brought up to WP Quality standards. Also, fans keep adding new couple and [[supercouple]] pages for practically every set of characters, most of which is in blatant violation of [[WP:NOR]]. I would think most of the "couple" pages are good candidates for deletion. A few, like [[Luke and Laura Spencer]] are definitely Notable for their contribution to the modern Soap Opera, but most are frivolous and unnecessary.--[[User:66.91.225.99|66.91.225.99]] 02:34, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Rachel Stevens]] - The article seems to have too many sections, and become very messy and untidy to look at. [[User:Blacksilkandy|Blacksilkandy]] 22:05, 16 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Spread of Islam]] - This article has a few passages with clearly biased points of view and should be written much more neutrally. Examples of quotes include "The infamous Hakim (Al-Hakim bi-amr-Allah, the sixth Egyptian Caliph, 996-1021, who became the god of the Druze) determined to destroy the Holy Sepulchre (In 1010.)" Infamous? God of the Druze? What?
:*"Yet, in spite of all, Christianity failed, and Islam succeeded in gaining the Iranian race." I think there is a much better way of saying that. --[[User:213.174.190.59|213.174.190.59]] 17:00, 16 March 2007 (UTC)
::*Attempted to fix some of the biased phrasing. Still needs some work. --[[User:Drsexlove|Drsexlove]] 16:00, 3 June, 2007 (UTC)
*[[Library]] - Could probably be divided up into several articles: one section has a request for development. -- [[User:Jackiespeel|Jackiespeel]] 19:09, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Sri]] - The article is just totally misformatted and repeats paragraph; spacing is all wrong. The whole thing is royally screwed up.
:*Cleaned it up some. Still needs work. [[User:RichM90071|RichM90071]] 01:34, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Jared Ingersoll]] - All the information is there, the page needs formatting work, wikification and sources.
*[[Sunflower_oil]] - Is nearly an advertisement. No NPOV, and no hear-say claims.
:*I did fix the overzealous capitalization. -- [[User:Sci girl|Sci girl]] 04 May 2007
*[[Rancho San Joaquin Middle School]] - Seems a little one-sided, don't you think. It is only talking about one humanities teacher, Kay Gee, there are other humanities teachers and other teachers there who deserve to have their name on their as well, not just her. Please do something about it, I didn't want to touch it, but I might fix it a bit... just a bit.
*[[Shorts]] - The section 'Motivation' is poorly worded. -- [[User:Bitbut|Bitbut]] 01:46, 13 March 2007 (UTC)
:*I tried to clean it up a bit and reword it. More than just the ''Motivation'' section needs work. --[[User:Mirmadon|Joanna]] 03:09, 16 March 2007 (UTC)
::*I agree, but that's not the half of it. For a start, it seems to be written, without realising it, from an entirely monocultural (North American) point of view, but this is a subject on which attitudes and practice vary a lot even within the English-speaking world, never mind everywhere else. There are also a lot of terminological and definition problems. Unfortunately I know a lot about this subject, so I suppose I shall have to get down to work on it. [[User:Woblosch|Woblosch]] 22:35, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Shady Side Academy]] - May read too much like a promotional. -- [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 13:56, 15 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Innovation Relay Centre Network]] - Reads like promotional, but perhaps it can be salvaged. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 19:33, 15 March 2007 (UTC)

===March 1-11, 2007===
*[[Intermolecular force]] - Citations need to be added.
*[[Gaffney High School]] - A user has put a large amount of unformatted text in the article, and asked me not to revert it. Could somebody make heads or tails of it? - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 18:26, 10 March 2007 (UTC)
:*The broken formatting has been fixed, but I still think there's too much (not particularly encyclopedic) content. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 14:08, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Varalaru - History of Godfather]] - Many grammatical and clarity errors. Much of the content essential to a good article on a film is there, but it is also confusing to read. Most of the spelling errors have been addressed, but the original author(s) may not be familiar enough with English (no criticism intended). A good copy editor is essential, and familiarity with the film may be beneficial. The article will benefit from much paring of excessive detail, and significant citing. Also, many, many incidences of what appears to be [[WP:OR|original research]], or at least, personal interpretation. :<span style="color: #000099">&mdash;</span><small><span style="border: 1px solid #000099">[[User:JimDunning|'''<span style="background-color:White; color:#000099"> &nbsp;Jim Dunning&nbsp;</span>''']][[User talk:JimDunning|<span style="background-color:#000099; color:white">&nbsp;talk&nbsp;</span>]]</span>&nbsp;:&nbsp;</small> 03:30, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Country pop]] - No sources, informal and awkward style (incl. unnecessarily long, if not run-on, sentences), poor grammar.
*[[National Monument (Ireland)]] - Just plain confusing
**Cleanup and confusion tags added. [[User:TenPoundHammer|TenPoundHammer]] 22:51, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[The Woods Hole, Martha's Vineyard and Nantucket Steamship Authority]] - This article is organized poorly.
*[[Privatization]] - Most of this article suffers from a total lack of sources. Furthermore, it has relatively little information on its actual subject; actual facts about privatization are overwhelmed by information about arguments pro and con. Even discussions of actual privatizations tend to overemphasize information about the arguments surrounding it relative to other facts, which is a serious information bias. [[User:Elliotreed|Elliotreed]] 19:35, 7 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[British African-Caribbean community]] - Is supposed to be about the African and Caribbean communities in Britain but instead is completely about the Caribbean, please clean it up. I already tried but somebody changed it back.
:*I think you're misunderstanding the term 'African-Caribbean'; think of it like 'African-American', ie Caribbean citizens of African descent (not Caribbean citizens and African citizens). Hope that helps. [[User:Jonathanmills|Jonathanmills]] 20:33, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
*[[Praieira revolt]] - This article needs cleanup. Needs more context and details. It's badly in need of sourcing and a general reorginaziation of the info. It reads like a philosophical essay rather than an article and is light on any real meat. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 00:57, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Viva Piñata (TV series)]] - Badly written, needs markup and source links. -- <font color="green">[[User:Treelo|treelo]]</font> <sub>[[User talk:Treelo|talk]]</sub> 18:33, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
:*Cleaned up grammar a little, but I didn't want to touch it much because I know nothing on the subject. --[[User:postofficebox|postofficebox]]
*[[Precompiled header]] - Needs a grammar check, I would clean it up now, but it's a bit early in the morning for me. --[[User:Roguelazer|Roguelazer]] 09:03, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
:*I cleaned up the grammar, but the page still needs a C++ expert's attention. -- [[User:ObtuseAngle|ObtuseAngle]] 15:52, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
::*Grammar corrections concerning some topics I know, but the page still needs C++ experts' revision. -- [[User:Rjgodoy|Rjgodoy]] 13:27, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Thai_lunar_calendar]] - Has a lot of confusing formatting.
*[[Jamie Sweeney]] - Article is messy, cleaned it up a bit but needs more work.
*[[Sathya Sai Baba movement]] - Possibly many problems with the article. The only serious contributor to the article (user:Andries) is or will be banned by the [[Wikipedia:arbitration committee]]. See [[talk:Sathya Sai Baba movement]] for a description of the possible problems. [[User:Andries|Andries]] 19:43, 4 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Animal cell]] article: needs more info, I was looking up information for my science test tomorrow and there was only the definitions of the three main parts of the cell.
:* Much more information can be found at [[human cell]]s. --[[User:Andries|Andries]] 19:28, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Ranger's Apprentice (series)]] - Requires checking of detail, an info bar, a table of contents, locations, cleanup of messy character section, and better summary of the books.
*[[Biotechnology]] - Needs a cleanup of the formatting and on the info. It is currently too messy and hard to retrieve information from...
*[[Europa-Park]] - Added the Infobox, but will not format properly. Can somebody take a look and help out? Also the article is in need of some general reformatting to make it easier to read. [[User:Poeloq|Poeloq]] 21:56, 4 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Ruthenium (II) tris (bathophenantroline disulfonate)]] Can someone translate this into something approaching English? [[User:Jackiespeel|Jackiespeel]] 16:42, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
:* The introduction to this article provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. ([[User:Rjgodoy|Rjgodoy]] 14:34, 3 March 2007 (UTC))
::*Hard for a layman to understand. Sourcing is wonky. Lacks an intro that breaks it down for the layman. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 14:42, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Killer_application#Selected_applications_for_gaming_consoles|Killer_application #Selected applications for gaming consoles]] - The list is too large and many of the games are not noteworthy enough. The list is also too opinion based. -- [[User:Zomic13|Zomic_13]] 15:59, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
:*Agreed. Article lacks any sort of sourcing, though it looks like the list has been culled quite a bit. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 17:29, 6 June 2007 (UTC)

==February 2007==
===16-28 February, 2007===
*[[The Bad Girls Club]] - Copyediting needed to fix grammatical and syntax errors. Overall organization needed. [[User:24.22.210.14|24.22.210.14]] 19:10, 28 February 2007 (UTC)
:*Fixed some grammatical errors. --[[User:Akiramenai|Akiramenai]] 06:55, 28 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Jauhar]] - This article seems to have been patched together from other Wikipedia material and original work from a non-native English speaker. Even if the grammatical errors were fixed, this article could still probably stand to be completely rewritten, referenced, and generally wikified. - [[User:Lukeonia1|Lukeonia1]] 09:10, 28 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[Mars Hill Church]] - Read a little too informally and a little too much like an ad. Already did some cleanup, but could possibly use more. - [[User:Raekwon|raekwon]] 14:05, 28 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[Theodore Roosevelt, Jr.]] - Redundancy; awkward chronology; copyediting needed.
:*I did a lot of copyediting and rewording for clarity, and removed some redundant text. However, this still needs a look from someone familiar with the topic. --[[User:DoorsAjar|DoorsAjar]] 00:42, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
*[[Nautical tourism]] - Worthy topic, but needs a rewrite/expansion; unreferenced, not written in an encyclopedic style. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 11:14, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[Tony Hutchinson]] - Bad grammar and lots of broken links. [[User:Samx|Samx]] 20:08, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[Lexical knowledge]] - Currently orphaned, cites no references, and in need of encyclopedic style. [[User:WillHarper|WillHarper]] 00:14, 28 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[Libertà condizionata]] - Same as above. Both articles were created by the same user, and are plagued with basic structural problems. Appears to be talking about the parole system in Italy - someone with knowledge of that would have an easier time cleaning this up. -[[User:Cue the Strings|Cue the Strings]] 17:23, 26 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[Tom Monaghan]] - This article has a severe lack of references, and have some NPOV issues as well. --[[User:Kristjan Wager|Kristjan Wager]] 13:09, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[Adult Theater]] - Needs lots of cleanup, including fixing references etc [[User:Rtcoles|Rtcoles]] 21:09, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[Rupert Lowe]] This article has a lot of information, but it is poorly structured. The tone is too conversational and there are numerous uncited POV assertions.+
*[[The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock]] - I put in a cleanup-reminder tag about halfway through the article. The first half of the article is good, but the second half needs a grammar, spelling, and style check, along with wikification. - [[User:Im.a.lumberjack|Im.a.lumberjack]] 23:44, 22 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[Mariavite Church]] thorough/comprehensive but slightly POV/over-favourable. [[User:Jackiespeel|Jackiespeel]] 17:07, 21 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[RMI-IIOP]] It assumes too much background knowledge. It has no general discussion about what this protocol is, what various forms it takes, what it's used for, it's history etc. I already know a little bit about them and use them but came here to learn something more and went away without the info I was looking for. Dougher 04:27, 20 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[Geophagy]] - Screwy formatting and wikification, and an over-emphasis on cultural issues at the expense of medical content.
*[[Muv-Luv]] - This article is written in a very confusing way. The character information appears to be the central feature rather than the main story itself. Apparently, the information came from a Japanese source, so it needs a cleanup to meet up the standards of an article written in English. Thank you, [[User:Minakomel|Minako-Chan*]] 14:37, 18 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[Shaba I]] - Article appears to include a lot of good information, but I can't make head or tail of it. It has been tagged for a short while. [[User:J Milburn|J Milburn]] 22:37, 17 February 2007 (UTC)
:*I provided a proper intro. Lacks sourcing. Could use some expansion, maybe some tonal edits. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 18:29, 12 May 2007 (UTC)

===1-15 February, 2007===
*[[Fourier optics]] - This is an important topic, but it has a description which is utterly confusing for the layman. Definitely needs to be rewritten. Tagged for Confusing. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 20:00, 14 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[Wham!]] - Needs grammar, punctuation, complete sentence help, as well as sources.
:*Cleaned up grammar/punctuation/sentence structure, but the article needs thorough referencing.[[User:Akronpow|akronpow]] 20:10, 15 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[Lysine]] - Requires much reworking including sources/verification, conforming to wiki standards, etc.
*[[Special:Linksearch/upload.wikimedia.org]] In articles: often incorrectly linked images. In other namespaces: generally no problem. - User:Docu
*[[Broken Sky]] & [[Broken Sky Characters]] - Need to be a lot more thorough. - Unsigned use
*[[Galactic North]] & [[Revelation Space]] - Both unfinished and need to be completed. Not all the stories in Galactic north are even in the article.
*[[Political communications]] - Needs a more worldwide worldview; Sources. -- [[User:Martpol|Martpol]] 13:14, 5 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[William Poole]] (American 19th cent. NYC bully or gangster) - Lead section is two graphics, the rest is a data dump of contemporary journalism.--[[User:Jerzy|Jerzy]]•[[User talk:Jerzy|t]]
*[[Gaia Online]] - Entry is very biased, and has been edited for malicious purposes.
*[[Religion and politics]] - First section does not belong: some of the other entries could be separated out as stubs or longer. [[User:Jackiespeel|Jackiespeel]] 14:59, 2 February 2007 (UTC)
*[[New Zealand local body elections 2004]] - has a list of the winner of one mayoral election, and one ward result, and the rest is a list of councils. - [[User:Kripto|Kripto]] 22:57, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

==January 2007==
===January 21 - 31, 2007===
*[[Husky Rescue]] - Reads like an ad or a press release. It's not clear if the subject passes [[WP:MUSIC]]. [[Special:Contributions/Aecis|<font color="blue">A</font>]][[User:Aecis|<font color="green">ecis</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Aecis|Brievenbus]]</sup> 13:43, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
*[[Readability test]] - no structure, needs to be wikified. [[User:Tygartl1|Tygartl1]] 18:16, 29 January 2007 (UTC)
*[[eminent domain]] - This will require a lot of work. Some issues listed in "talk" page, including general wikification, better citation, restructuring, and reduction of legalistic jargon. -[[User:Peteforsyth|Pete]] 23:56, 29 January 2007 (UTC)
*[[Bat Boy: The Musical]] - This article is ridiculously convoluted in its Synopsis section. Also has major tone issues and reads like fancruft. Major trimming needed. Also needs sourcing.[[User:Ryoji.kun|Ryoji.kun]] 04:31, 25 January 2007 & --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] ([[User talk:Lendorien|talk]]) 16:54, 28 May 2008 (UTC)
*[[Psychological warfare]]- Poorly written, reads like a bad high school paper. Tagged this as suggested on the talk page.
*[[Dumba]] - Looks like a [[WP:COI|vanity]] page, little encyclopedic content. Needs severe pruning. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 16:56, 23 January 2007 (UTC)
*[[Alex Rackley]] - reads like a poorly written newspaper article; needs grammar correction and general cleanup. --[[User:Mkoyle|Matthew K]] 03:36, 24 January 2007 (UTC)
*[[Green Politics]] - needs a complete makeover
*[[Allu Arjun]] - needs almost complete rewrite - reads like a vanity article at this time. [[ Wikipedia:Articles for deletion |<font color="red"><strong>V</strong></font>]][[User:VirtualSteve/Images|<font color="blue"><strong>i</strong></font>]][[Special:Random|<font color="green"><strong>r</strong></font>]][[User talk:VirtualSteve|<font color="purple"><strong>tual</strong></font>]][[User:VirtualSteve|<font color="black"><strong>Steve</strong></font>]] 10:29, 22 January 2007 (UTC)
*[[Cyber-bullying]] - Badly in need of overhaul in every sense. Needs more valid, verifiable information. Lacks citations, what citations it has relate to single source, which, while valid enough, risks POV. -- [[User:Zeraeph|Zeraeph]] 13:46, 21 January 2007 (UTC)
*[[Muraqabah]] - Doesn't use sections, is a guide on meditating or something (possibly shouldn't be in Wikipedia?), I'm not also sure this is [[WP:N]]. Maybe someone should nominate it for deletion, but at the very least it needs substantial work. --[[User:SLi|SLi]] 19:08, 21 January 2007 (UTC)

===January 11 - 20, 2007===
*[[Risk society]] - Doesn't read like a wikipedia article. Possibly copied from somewhere. [[User:87.127.73.65|87.127.73.65]] 02:19, 20 January 2007 (UTC)
*[[Nat Tarnopol]] - Either an unwikified textdump or perhaps a copyvio. [[Special:Contributions/Aecis|<font color="blue">A</font>]][[User:Aecis|<font color="green">ecis</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Aecis|Bravado]]</sup> 19:33, 18 January 2007 (UTC)
*The article on [[Drew Brees]], New Orleans Quarterback, needed revision. Someone posted inapporiate comments. {{unsigned|75.128.195.154}}
*[[List of collegiate secret societies]] - this list needs standards to prevent sprawl, see discusion for proposed guidelines. -- [[User:2afterblue|2afterblue]] 14:50, 16 January 2007 (UTC)
*[[Sweet Tooth (Twisted Metal)]] - this article is badly in need of a rewrite. -- [[User:Tygartl1|Tygartl1]] 02:41, 16 January 2007 (UTC)
*[[SEIKIMA-II]] - This needs a huge cleanup. Albums need their own pages and should be removed from band's page. Additional info needs to be given on the band as well, as there is currently no background information there. -- [[User:Doberman Pharaoh|Doberman Pharaoh]] 03:27, 16 January 2007 (UTC)
*[[Comstock Music Festivals]] need to be fleshed out, especially citing numbers of attendees, organizing the bands by year/festival, and creating more links. [[User: bmoorewiki]] 2:52 CST
*[[Interlochen Arts Camp]] Unorganized and confusing. This page has been nearly destroyed by unreverted vandalisms and POV edits. The list of Notable alumni is especially bad. Interlochen Arts Camp section need Wikifying. [[User:S.dedalus|S.dedalus]] 21:33, 11 January 2007 (UTC)

===January 1 - 10, 2007===
*[[Water_cannon|Water cannon]] - No references. --[[User:RedHillian|RedHillian]] 04:21, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
*[[Special Assessment Tax]] (mistakenly created at [[First article]]) - unwikified, possibly copied from somewhere. - [[User:Mike Rosoft|Mike Rosoft]] 22:38, 4 January 2007 (UTC)
*[[Yellow Pages]] - other countries and regions section needs to be cleaned up re. URLs, layout and general content.
*[[Zygosity]] - A mess. jkhjkSomeone has combined three reasonable articles into one strange amalgam, using copy & paste rather than merging histories. This needs someone to right the wrongs who also knows enough of the science to know what they're doing. --[[User:Grutness|Grutness]]...''<small><font color="#008822">[[User_talk:Grutness|wha?]]</font></small>'' 01:03, 1 January 2007 (UTC)
:*Still unresolved. Needs EXPERT who knows the subject to sort it out. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 20:00, 11 April 2007 (UTC)
*[[Cooperative]] and others (many [[User:Rkitko/sandbox2|here]], notably [[Co-operative economics]] and [[Co-operative Federalism]]/[[Cooperative federalism]] mess) - Mixed usage in text within most of those articles (cooperative versus co-operative) and mixed usage between articles makes for confusing in-text links. This would require someone with admin powers to complete some of the needed moves, but otherwise it just needs someone with a lot of time to comb through and correct the spellings to how the article is titled. Gave me a migraine. Buona fortuna! --[[User:Rkitko|Rkitko]] 08:10, 1 January 2007 (UTC)

=2006=
==December 2006==
*[[Airsoft]]-This has been tagged for a while, but was never added to the list. Most of the cleanup needed deals with style and tone. [[User:65.197.192.130|65.197.192.130]] 23:41, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
*[[Comte de Lautreamont]] This article was totally rewritten in essay style with many mistakes in grammar, tone, etc. In addition, the objective tone was destroyed and added information was unsourced and repetitive.
*[[Ghosthunter]] has a lot of spelling and grammatical problems. Just needs someone to clean it up that's actually played the game, as many of the issues are in the plot section. [[User:Galactor213|Galactor213]] 00:49, 24 December 2006 (UTC)
:*Eek! I just tagged it for plot and refs issues, but I can't even find [http://news.google.com/archivesearch?q=Ghosthunter+SCEE&ie=UTF-8&oe=utf-8&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&client=firefox-a&um=1&tab=wn any evidence] of this game's notability. <small>'''TRAVELLINGCARI'''</small>'''<sup>[[User:Travellingcari|My story]]</sup>'''<sub>[[User talk:Travellingcari|Tell me yours]]</sub> 04:05, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
*[[Colin Moss]] has a lot of repeating info. Might need some re-organization. [[User:Tygartl1|Tygartl1]] 21:17, 21 December 2006 (UTC)
*[[Texas United States House elections, 2006]] - This article needs to be brought up to date. --[[User:Xerxes855|Xerxes855]] 05:27, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
:Started work on this, copied in election boxes I could find, will get onto the rest soon.
*[[Abd al Hamid Ben Badis]] - This article is completely messed up, compared to the French and Arabic version of the article. -[[User:Escondites|Escondites]] 05:29, 11 December 2006 (UTC)
*[[AMC and Jeep transmissions]] - Needs heavy wikifying and a major cleanup. --[[User:ApolloBoy|ApolloBoy]] 00:57, 11 December 2006 (UTC)
*[[Safety climate]] - created by [[WP:AFC]] request; don't have time to fix it
:*I propose that safety climate and safety culture be merged, as they appear to be very similar concepts, perhaps one being the European and the other the American terms for in effect the idea. [[User:Timtregenza|timtregenza]] 07:19, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
*[[2000 NHL Entry Draft]] - Round 6 to 9 need to be properly formatted. [[Wikipedia:Requests for adminship/Aecis|<font color="blue">A</font>]][[User:Aecis|<font color="green">ecis</font>]] <sup>[[Special:Contributions/Aecis|Dancing]] to electro-pop [[User talk:Aecis|like a robot]] from 1984.</sup> 13:51, 4 December 2006 (UTC)
:*I'll get started on this. May take a while......[[User:King Bombard|{*TEE DUB*}]] ([[User talk:King Bombard|talk]]) 18:56, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
*[[Samuel Colt]] - has no structure and makes references to things that are never mentioned. Not very clear to someone unfamiliar with the subject. [[User:70.170.27.119|70.170.27.119]] 16:55, 2 December 2006 (UTC)

==November 2006==
*[[Travis S Taylor]] - Article sounded like fan-speak, I have made some changes to the tone but some sections still lack citations. [[User:Metlin|Metlin]] 18:51, 28 November 2006 (UTC)
:I did a fair bit of cleanup and fixed the tone, but it still needs a lot of sourcing. See my (very brief) comments on [[Talk:Travis Taylor (author)|the article's talk page]]. - [[User:EdiOnjales|edi]] ([[User talk:EdiOnjales|talk]]) 03:56, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
*[[Multi-agent_system]] - The article lacks a general description. There should be a long general description of MAS, and a short concrete example (not the other way round, as it is now) --[[User:JFromm|JFromm]] 13:20, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
*[[Alice Academy]] - Information on the article, mostly on the characters are very confusing... -[[User:210.213.159.187|210.213.159.187]]
*[[Paravas]] - I have been editing this page for style and general cleanup. This page also needs citations and some consolidation of information that is repeated in the article in different places. I am continuing to work on this article but I think it will benefit from multiple hands.[[User:Dalassa|Dalassa]] 13:24, 20 November 2006 (UTC)
*[[Henry Ward Beecher]] - The article is just a continuous stream of quotes from sources, and is therefore extremely disjointed. [[User:Anchoress|Anchoress]] 03:54, 5 November 2006 (UTC)
:*I've done a few things here and there in this article. Still needs work. The same two sources are quoted repeatedly for almost the entire article. --[[User:Lendorien|Lendorien]] 09:55, 5 April 2007 (UTC)


*[[List of PlayStation 1 games]] - needs references for every game listed. Each game is also missing the entries for it's developer, publisher, and release date. [[User:Ceros|Ceros]] 02:59, 30 October 2006 (UTC)
:*I'll get started on this. Got to start clean up somewhere. :) [[User:Shallon Michaels|Shallon Michaels]] ([[User talk:Shallon Michaels|talk]]) 18:45, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
*[[Religion and politics]] - I started this a while ago when the [[Christianity and politics]] page was created: it now needs some tidying up or possibly separate pages for particular religions. [[User:Jackiespeel|Jackiespeel]] 17:12, 16 October 2006 (UTC)
::I've done a huge overhaul, but it still needs tons of sourcing. See my notes on [[Talk:Religion and politics|the article's talk page]]. -- [[User:EdiOnjales|edi]] ([[User talk:EdiOnjales|talk]]) 23:13, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
*[[Infantry tactics]] may not represent a neutral worldview. Some assertions are not supported with detailed references. The introduction is vague and needs to be expanded.

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