Wikipedia:Articles for Improvement/Vermont National Guard

This article has a number of issues, not the least of which is (1) that it reads as an essay rather than an encyclopedic piece and (2), more importantly, a substantial contributor is a Guard member who seemingly wrote the citations linked to (links don't work); user name billmckern linked to citations from a <a href="https://www.facebook.com/william.mckern">William McKern</a>.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Vttor (talk • contribs)