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Can you please help me with the references and External Links? Thank you.


Mbehm1978 (talk) 04:04, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

i am not good in editing , can any one help me to do necessary changes to my article

Shukkoorpc (talk) 11:29, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I am not good writing , can any one help me to do necessary changes to my article

Grafikart 13:44, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

titanic update

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Just trying to understand on your information listed considering artifacts from 

the Titanic from the ocean floor. When at the Luxor in Las Vegas they state they have part of a ship wall from the Titanic?


24.12.26.117 (talk) 15:41, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, this is a feedback request for an expanded article on U.S. rhythmic gymnast Julie Zetlin. I have added an infobox; wikified terms; and rewritten the lede. I would like to request that this article be reviewed, with an eye toward whether the wikification tag can be removed. Thanks so much.

Seandalytx (talk) 17:12, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reference is made to operation in http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/US_Wars without an existing article.


Hippypaul 17:40, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

Request for review and removal of the unreviewed-article tag. In response to a reviewer suggestion, I've added additional external references. Thank you!

Jmugge (talk) 17:50, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Just want to check check I have the formatting correct. Thank you


Shango3000 (talk) 18:33, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This page is one for an upcoming model. There not much information at the moment, but she is destined to be big, so this is just a start. All the info is completely accurate as im in touch with ms robinson herself. however, if you could kindly pitch in what i could add for this article? or what the page is missing. also, i can't seem to move the page as it says my im too "new", or i may be "blocked". So when exactly would i be able to move this article?

thankyou for your time xxx


Larxs (talk) 18:51, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved
Please read WP:UPANDCOMING and WP:BIO, as well as WP:COI. --Orange Mike | Talk 21:06, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

looking to finally complete the listing that I have placed on Wikipedia. Followed all the suggestions and now would love to have this finalized

Ren6967 (talk) 21:45, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

[[2]] ken Ehrlich

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Ren6967 (talk) 21:46, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Feronia Inc. page requires feedback

207.219.37.98 (talk) 00:59, 9 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]