Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Aurelian
I would like to know what are the weak points of this article, and how to improve it.--Panarjedde 13:16, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
Nice start! Some remarks:
- The article needs inline citations.
- In the lead you have a whole seperate paragraph with its full name. I don't know if this is definitely necessary.
- You don't have any information about his early years. Isn't there any available?
- What was the "Palmyrene Empire", the "Gallic Empire" and the "Sassanid Empire". You should offer us some explanations I think.
- After adding inline citations, you should reorganize "References and further reading". You put the sources you used in "References" and further material in "Further reading". "External links" is usually a seperate section.
- Alphabetize categories at the end of the article.
- I think you could add a section with assessments about Aurelian or with an analysis of his legacy, if the sources offer such a possibility.--Yannismarou 09:11, 4 November 2006 (UTC)