Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Massively multiplayer online role-playing game/Archive 1

MMORPG

I believe that with a bit of work, this article can easily come up to GA standards. I am aware that is is uncited and I am hoping to find other ways to improve the article in addition to referencing. TIA! Greeves ^{(talk • contribs)} 01:42, 24 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Anyone? I could really use some suggestions of ways to improve the article. Greeves ^{(talk • contribs • reviews)} 04:18, 6 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The article is 41 kilobytes long, WP:SIZE recommends keeping it below 32k. See if it can be shortened a little, but obviously don't compromise article quality.
Prosify those bulleted lists.
This is rich, as I have a tendency to do this, but there are too many comments (inside brackets).
There seems to be a concentration of images in the top right of the article. See if you can spread them out evenly.

Hope this helps, CaptainVindaloo ^{t c e} 23:45, 7 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]