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Wild Arms (series)[edit]

After today's huge re-write, the Wild Arms series page is looking quite a bit better! This is the latest of my "get as many Wild Arms pages up to snuff as I can" project, and I'd appreciate any help you guys can give. Also, I'm aware the image MichikoNaruke.png doesn't have a fair use rationale or possibly even the right copyright tag, but I don't know what to put! Thanks for looking. Nall 04:56, 30 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I'd say this is at least GA status, and would reccomend listing it on the candidates page. However,
  • I noticed that the picture you mentioned does indeed need a rationale. Pictures of people don't often appear in game articles. My recommendation would be to think to yourself why the picture is needed in the first place. Think logically; ideas might be
  • The image is being used in an informative way and should not detract from the series
  • Use of this image does not limit or prevent the license holders' ability to sell any game in the Wild Arms series
  • The image helps explain the music of the Wild Arms series
  • The image is of web resolution
  • The lead has a little OR, as does Recurring themes. If you need a list examples of facts likely to be challenged, let me know.
  • "While some critics praise Wild Arms for its unique approach to storytelling". Needs ref.
  • Critical reception section feels lacking. Maybe include a table of overall scores from MetaCritic or GameRankings? I'm not quite sure.
  • The external links section has the official website in Japanese. Maybe to compensate include the official entries of wild arms at the publishers and developer websites. If this is not possible, that's okay.

Top notch work.--Clyde (talk) 19:37, 29 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I'm glad someone got around to reviewing the article, thanks again Clyde. After a long wikibreak I may be able to tackle this one again. I'm going to look at the problems you suggested and see if I can polish it up a bit more. Changes will be added to this page as they are made. Thanks alot! Nall 00:42, 15 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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