User contributions for Officiallyover
A user with 1,291 edits. Account created on 5 October 2004.
13 August 2024
- 14:5014:50, 13 August 2024 diff hist −2 m Monolith (Space Odyssey) Responses DRIVE, and responses INFLUENCE. (plural)
2 August 2024
- 14:2714:27, 2 August 2024 diff hist 0 m South African springhare →Traditional human uses: comma / no comma to last sentence current
30 July 2024
- 17:0817:08, 30 July 2024 diff hist +61 Parenting styles →Differences for male and female children: Mascaro et al. paper described ONLY fathers. No support for statement "mothers don't see a difference...," not even in Intro or Discussion. In fact, 1st parag of Intro makes 2 statements that mothers AND fathers treat boys/girls differently.
15 July 2024
- 20:1220:12, 15 July 2024 diff hist +11 Emil Erlenmeyer →Academic career: not just the chemical formula (Faraday) but the structure current
14 June 2024
- 06:4706:47, 14 June 2024 diff hist +110 List of natural disasters by death toll Undid revision (vandalism) 1228953443 by 175.143.36.153 (talk) Tag: Undo
4 May 2024
- 21:0321:03, 4 May 2024 diff hist +4 m Villeurbanne "the" is more idiomatic English
16 April 2024
- 19:0419:04, 16 April 2024 diff hist −158 Crystal-storing histiocytosis Mild/moderate copy edit throughout.
- 18:5818:58, 16 April 2024 diff hist +9 Crystal-storing histiocytosis "buckle" is not an anatomic location. "Buccal" is an adjective. But the cited paper just says "lip and cheek."
6 March 2024
- 20:5920:59, 6 March 2024 diff hist −1 m University of Michigan →1837–1900: fix tense of "establishing"
9 February 2024
- 17:3517:35, 9 February 2024 diff hist +400 Lizzie Fletcher →Committee assignments: Two references (rep's own house.gov page, and the committee's house.gov page)
- 17:3017:30, 9 February 2024 diff hist −278 Lizzie Fletcher →Committee assignments: Removed 2 subcommittees (health, environment) and changed one (consumer protection --> energy, climate, grid). Refs to follow.
31 January 2024
- 07:5107:51, 31 January 2024 diff hist +1 m Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep? →Background and setting: really needed a comma
2 January 2024
- 20:0420:04, 2 January 2024 diff hist +3,397 Talk:Modeling and simulation add parked text
- 20:0320:03, 2 January 2024 diff hist +900 Talk:Modeling and simulation →Pharmacy education section: new section Tag: New topic
- 19:5519:55, 2 January 2024 diff hist −3,402 Modeling and simulation Pharmacy education section uses "simulation" in a very different sense from the rest of the article. See talk page.
14 December 2023
- 17:2017:20, 14 December 2023 diff hist 0 m Gamma function →General: typo
9 November 2023
- 20:1320:13, 9 November 2023 diff hist −8 m Intellectualization why is it "further examples"? Surely simply "examples." Perhaps "examples" was deleted earlier?
21 September 2023
- 19:1819:18, 21 September 2023 diff hist +5 m John Augustine Hartford →Life and career: mild copy edit (hyphens, usually, and some unneeded spaces in compound words) current
- 19:1419:14, 21 September 2023 diff hist +4 m John Augustine Hartford →Life and career: wikilink green stamps
24 August 2023
- 14:4514:45, 24 August 2023 diff hist +473 User talk:ComplexRational →Strontium and rubidium-82 and beta plus?: new section Tag: New topic
- 14:3914:39, 24 August 2023 diff hist +754 Talk:Rubidium-82 →Strontium decays via beta plus??: new section Tag: New topic
- 14:2914:29, 24 August 2023 diff hist −14 Rubidium-82 →Production: I think this decay mode is factually incorrect; see talk page.
11 August 2023
- 09:0509:05, 11 August 2023 diff hist +2 m Paradise Lost: The Child Murders at Robin Hood Hills I really think this should be subsection of Description
- 00:4300:43, 11 August 2023 diff hist +1,681 Talk:Permanent income hypothesis →Why the Greek explanatory footnotes?: new section Tag: New topic
10 August 2023
- 23:4023:40, 10 August 2023 diff hist 0 m McKinsey & Company →Research and publishing: no hyphen
- 22:4922:49, 10 August 2023 diff hist +55 m William O. Douglas →Environmentalism: wikilink to the precise park
7 August 2023
- 08:1808:18, 7 August 2023 diff hist +2 m Solvay process →History: Mostly fix incomplete sentence (His solution, ...) which could be kept separate like I did, or incorporated into preceding sentence.
26 June 2023
- 22:3922:39, 26 June 2023 diff hist −1 m Mark Forstater →Career: 2 slight typos
4 February 2023
- 21:1821:18, 4 February 2023 diff hist −15 m The Red Shoes (fairy tale) →Background: Can't say "origins is based on"
- 19:5819:58, 4 February 2023 diff hist −15 Michele Oka Doner →Education: not the same as the band
26 October 2022
- 11:0211:02, 26 October 2022 diff hist −119 Emily Compagno →Family: consolidated in to paragraphs based on chronology
- 10:5410:54, 26 October 2022 diff hist −2,029 Emily Compagno →Family: far fewer details
- 10:5010:50, 26 October 2022 diff hist +14 Emily Compagno This (still very long) passage deserves separate section
- 10:4810:48, 26 October 2022 diff hist −5,375 Emily Compagno →Early life and education: consolidate 1 ref used multiple times, using named refs
- 10:4210:42, 26 October 2022 diff hist −34 Emily Compagno →Early life and education: paragraphs to start. Far too detailed. Many references the same.
19 October 2022
- 15:4515:45, 19 October 2022 diff hist 0 m Albert Einstein in popular culture →Licensing: There is more than 1 district court. Not "the" district court. Likely Central District of California but we can keep it short.
30 September 2022
- 17:4217:42, 30 September 2022 diff hist −24 Kryptos →Solvers: More logical paragraphs. Now organized as follows: Gillogly, CIA, NSA, Friedrich, Sanborn's correction
20 September 2022
- 15:2415:24, 20 September 2022 diff hist −19 m Robust statistics I'm not in favor of hyphen here
19 September 2022
- 07:1407:14, 19 September 2022 diff hist 0 m Chief Wahoo →Later variations: 1 typo, 1 number agreement
- 00:2600:26, 19 September 2022 diff hist 0 m Glow stick →Toxicity: typo
- 00:2500:25, 19 September 2022 diff hist −300 Glow stick →Toxicity: More judicious quotes. Don't need to block-quote abstract or say which exact DNA adduct (without explaining abbr like deoxyadenosine) etc.
- 00:0900:09, 19 September 2022 diff hist −108 Glow stick →Toxicity: much less verbose intro to this paper
- 00:0800:08, 19 September 2022 diff hist +33 Glow stick →Toxicity: It's not a "Nature paper." This is a different journal.
- 00:0600:06, 19 September 2022 diff hist −94 Glow stick →Safety issues: That sentence "long term pollution" either needs a cite or already applies to "single use" section
- 00:0400:04, 19 September 2022 diff hist +3 Glow stick →Toxicity: initial edit of toxicity section
26 July 2022
- 14:1314:13, 26 July 2022 diff hist −4 m Black-oil equations Better formatting (spacing, punctuation)
24 February 2022
- 16:0316:03, 24 February 2022 diff hist +3 m HT3R mild copy edit, mostly about commas and hyphens current
- 16:0216:02, 24 February 2022 diff hist −54 HT3R remove some overused bold text, not needed in those places
- 16:0016:00, 24 February 2022 diff hist −34 HT3R rework 1st sentence to put bold text in proper place. De-wikilink some repetitive stuff.
- 15:5815:58, 24 February 2022 diff hist +4 m HT3R wikilink county
