User contributions for Scooterboss
A user with 764 edits. Account created on 18 December 2005.
23 April 2021
- 15:2815:28, 23 April 2021 diff hist −11 Joseph Grimaldi →Pop culture Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 14:4614:46, 23 April 2021 diff hist +3 m Joseph Grimaldi No edit summary Tag: Reverted
- 14:4314:43, 23 April 2021 diff hist +9 Joseph Grimaldi →Pop culture Tag: Reverted
- 14:4214:42, 23 April 2021 diff hist +674 Joseph Grimaldi added Grimaldi's appearance in Magnus Archives podcast Tag: Reverted
17 April 2017
- 14:4514:45, 17 April 2017 diff hist +391 The Blackcoat's Daughter →Plot: more specific description of narrative and locations for clarity, separated unrelated actions into different paragraphs
- 14:3514:35, 17 April 2017 diff hist +9 m The Blackcoat's Daughter →Plot: added "horns"
- 05:3005:30, 17 April 2017 diff hist +24 The Blackcoat's Daughter More accurate description of what telephone voice says to Kat. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:2705:27, 17 April 2017 diff hist +57 The Blackcoat's Daughter Changed description of demon. It's not clear if the demon is real or a by-product of mental illness. Only Kat ever appears to see it. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15 February 2017
- 23:5423:54, 15 February 2017 diff hist +190 I Am the Pretty Thing That Lives in the House →Plot: Included rug flipping up, added Ms. before Blum's last name for consistency with Mr. Waxcap
11 December 2016
- 01:2201:22, 11 December 2016 diff hist −29 Big Sur →Film setting: no citation needed - the short film is in the Sandpiper DVD
10 December 2016
- 13:3913:39, 10 December 2016 diff hist −9 I Am the Pretty Thing That Lives in the House →Plot: links, fixed vandalism
9 December 2016
- 02:3302:33, 9 December 2016 diff hist +7 m I Am the Pretty Thing That Lives in the House Link to central conceit Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
8 December 2016
- 02:3202:32, 8 December 2016 diff hist +3 m I Am the Pretty Thing That Lives in the House Link Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 December 2016
4 December 2016
- 23:4423:44, 4 December 2016 diff hist −7 m I Am the Pretty Thing That Lives in the House →Plot
- 13:5113:51, 4 December 2016 diff hist +435 I Am the Pretty Thing That Lives in the House →Plot: Explained concept of Blum's book and how it relates to plot
- 13:3513:35, 4 December 2016 diff hist −8 m I Am the Pretty Thing That Lives in the House →Plot: too many instances of "find" - used synonyms
3 December 2016
- 22:5322:53, 3 December 2016 diff hist +58 I Am the Pretty Thing That Lives in the House →Plot
- 22:5022:50, 3 December 2016 diff hist +95 I Am the Pretty Thing That Lives in the House →Plot: Lily finds a dried lily in Blum's book
- 17:2317:23, 3 December 2016 diff hist +85 I Am the Pretty Thing That Lives in the House →Plot: added line about Lily finding the box
- 16:5816:58, 3 December 2016 diff hist +206 I Am the Pretty Thing That Lives in the House →Plot: added line about Lily seeing mold on her arms
30 November 2016
- 13:1113:11, 30 November 2016 diff hist +83 I Am the Pretty Thing That Lives in the House →Plot: added TV reflection scene
- 02:2702:27, 30 November 2016 diff hist +150 m I Am the Pretty Thing That Lives in the House →Plot
- 02:1402:14, 30 November 2016 diff hist +823 I Am the Pretty Thing That Lives in the House →Plot: more detail about plot, including which actors played which roles Tag: Visual edit
3 August 2013
- 14:3814:38, 3 August 2013 diff hist +2 m The Conversation →Plot: replaced word; "guilt" is overused in this paragraph Tag: Visual edit
21 July 2013
- 16:4816:48, 21 July 2013 diff hist +4 The Conversation Italics to emphasize a misunderstanding of the single word on which the whole plot turns. Tag: Visual edit
- 16:3416:34, 21 July 2013 diff hist +32 m The Conversation No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 16:3116:31, 21 July 2013 diff hist −45 The Conversation Copy editing and clean up Tag: Visual edit
- 16:1416:14, 21 July 2013 diff hist +862 The Conversation copy editing, more detail about the pivotal scene in the hotel room Tag: Visual edit
- 05:2505:25, 21 July 2013 diff hist −83 The Sandpiper copy editing - replaced multiple uses of proper names with pronouns to clarify relationships between characters Tag: Visual edit
20 July 2013
- 21:4021:40, 20 July 2013 diff hist −1 m The Sandpiper No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 21:3921:39, 20 July 2013 diff hist +91 m The Sandpiper No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 20:3820:38, 20 July 2013 diff hist +105 The Sandpiper more detail about what happens to Danny after affair Tag: Visual edit
- 20:3420:34, 20 July 2013 diff hist +313 The Sandpiper more details about emotional states before affair, plot points during affair Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2720:27, 20 July 2013 diff hist +142 The Sandpiper More detail about the break up of the affair. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0720:07, 20 July 2013 diff hist +735 The Sandpiper Added real-life parallels section Tag: Visual edit
- 19:4719:47, 20 July 2013 diff hist +144 The Sandpiper More accurate description of Laura's feelings and her emotional transformation during the affair. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:4403:44, 20 July 2013 diff hist −3 m The Sandpiper No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3203:32, 20 July 2013 diff hist +23 The Sandpiper Copy editing, added links. Tag: Visual edit
22 July 2012
- 15:1615:16, 22 July 2012 diff hist −19 m Volkswagen Beetle (A5) Copy editing
19 May 2012
- 15:1115:11, 19 May 2012 diff hist +292 The Sandpiper Citation for Nepenthe
13 November 2011
- 22:0322:03, 13 November 2011 diff hist −21 Big Sur Copy editing
9 September 2011
- 11:3011:30, 9 September 2011 diff hist 0 Big Sur No edit summary
- 11:1111:11, 9 September 2011 diff hist 0 Big Sur →Big Sur today: update with 2010 census data on ZTCA 93920
7 September 2011
- 10:5310:53, 7 September 2011 diff hist +388 Avila Beach, California added section on correct pronunciation
- 10:2910:29, 7 September 2011 diff hist +12 Avila Beach, California Copy editing
21 August 2011
- 10:0610:06, 21 August 2011 diff hist 0 m Big Sur NPOV
28 July 2011
- 10:5410:54, 28 July 2011 diff hist −8 Santa Lucia Range Cone Peak is the highest coastal mountain in the lower 48. It's a 33 degree grade from sea level to the summit in an unbroken rise from the Pacific shore
- 10:5310:53, 28 July 2011 diff hist −100 Santa Lucia Range Deleted reference to Mount Angeles, as its 20 degree grade from sea level to summit is NOT steeper than Cone Peak's 33 degree grade
- 10:4910:49, 28 July 2011 diff hist +6 m Big Sur Copy editing
