Talk:Belize at the 2004 Summer Olympics

Belize at the 2004 Summer Olympics has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: December 3, 2018. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Belize at the 2004 Summer Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:49, 2 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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I will review this one shortly. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:49, 2 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

"The delegation consisted of two track and field athletes, Michael Aguilar and Emma Wade;" - colon instead of comma. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Background

"This made Athens their ninth appearance at a Summer Olympic Games, and they have yet to appear at any Winter Olympic Games." - "although" would be better than "and"
"Belize sent two track and field athletes to Athens, Michael Aguilar and Emma Wade." - colon instead of comma. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Athletes

"...time of the Athens Olympics, and had previously represented..." - no need for the comma.
"...heats of the women's 200 meters, and was drawn into heat five." - no need for the comma.
"Michael Aguilar was 24 years old at the time of these Olympics, and was making his only Olympic appearance." - no need for the comma.~
"He was drawn into heat three, and finished the heat in 51.21 seconds, finishing seventh and last in his heat, and he was eliminated." - recommend splitting into two sentences.

Images

Only photo is a country flag, which is PD. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

References

Are you going to archive the refs?
All other refs look good. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Looks pretty good, will place on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks, Gonzo fan2007 for another review. Everything has been addressed, and the refs have been archived. Courcelles (talk) 20:58, 3 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  - Awesome, looks good. i fixed a small typo fyi. Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:30, 3 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]