Talk:Dæmonicus/GA1
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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 03:47, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
- with many commenting on its storylines --> Surely they would comment on its storylines. What did they say about them? Did they suck? Were they amazing?
- A few issues with overlinking and overnaming. For example, when someone's name is mentioned one, their last name should only be used then after.
- TheXFiles.com should not be in italics, as it is not a magazine or other sort of published source.
- Other than that, I see no problems with the article. Great work!