Talk:Fruit pit carving

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Nice subject; Some comments!

please check interpunction. always place a space before a (; and a space after a </ref>, so:

this is ok (like this); this is not ok(like this)

this is good^[1] reference, but this^[2]is not ok

this is ok; number 1 .... this is not ok ; number one

finish the sentences that have now "..."
references from baidu can not be used on wikipedia. it is important to find other references. When you make a reference, make a translation of the title in English between brackets; add the source (website etc) and if possible: the author.
How do we know that fruit carving began 700BC, but the earlies record is of 1000 AD?
think about plurals in the first sentence ...imageS like fishing boatS, etc...
what is arhat?
For the classification section, references ar needed
Never use "you" in an encyclopedia. Use passive voice instead (it is possible to view ....)
Making the carves of a boat, including a poem. How is this possible? Is this true? or a fairy tale?
When you use dynasty indications of time (late Qing etc), always provide a year-range. Most readers are not familar at all with Chinese dynasties...

Good luck; don't hesitate to ask questions if you need! L.tak (talk) 20:55, 13 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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