Talk:Hands on Tzedakah

Article improvement

dear friends of wikipedia,

i submitted this article because it is essentially the same as every other non-profit organization in wiki's various charity categories. they all "promote" what they are doing in an encyclopedic fashion. i added several real,personal examples including quotes and online sources so that it would be different.

i can show you dozens of articles in wikipedia about non-profits that look pretty similar to this one.

if you have any suggestions on how i can write the article so it better fits, i would be very happy to do so. thanks. Soosim (talk) 15:20, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

ok, i have tried to clean it up! less peacock, more facts. edited for typos. neutral and not advertising -- i'm trying, let me know. Soosim (talk) 17:52, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

and now....a little additional tweaking of a few sentences. i hope this will now make it worthy of inclusion. thanks and happy holidays!Soosim (talk) 08:33, 25 December 2008 (UTC)

HELLO - hope all is well with y'all! i have done a few edits and rewrites - can you please check to see that it is all ok and if so, can you remove the 'warnings'? thanks! 89.139.33.159 (talk) 07:26, 9 January 2009 (UTC)

HELLO again... hope all is well with y'all! i have several edits and rewrites - can you please check to see that it is all ok and if so, can you remove the 'warnings'? thanks! Soosim (talk) 17:30, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

PLEASE will someone listen....i have been trying for weeks and weeks to get you to re-read the article and approve it without 'issues'....please...let me know. please? thank you! Soosim (talk) 12:55, 24 February 2009 (UTC)

arrghhh...anyone listening???? please....the article has been totally improved and fixed and ready for full inclusion WITHOUT those warnings. please.... Soosim (talk) 06:40, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

The article has been somewhat improved, but it still has some issues as well.--68.251.187.176 (talk) 15:13, 16 April 2009 (UTC)

Since it's kind of pointless to edit text that is going to be changed, I'm addressing both the issues with tone and with copy-editing. This may be a somewhat lengthy process. Suggestions would be appreciated. MindfulJen (talk) 03:55, 4 September 2010 (UTC)

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