Talk:Kirby: Planet Robobot
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Plot Section[edit]
I tried to revise the plot section to make it more accurate. However, one part feels clunky to me. I don't know how to word it better.
It originally said:
As Kirby destroys the armor covering the Access Ark, its true identity is revealed — a rebuilt Nova, the wish-granting comet used by Marx in Kirby Super Star.
However, the Access Ark is never stated to be the same Nova from Super Star. Seeing that the face is different, it's likely a separate member of the same species.
I revised it to say:
As Kirby destroys the armor covering the ship, its true identity is revealed—it's one of the wish granting comets used by Marx in Kirby Super Star.
That feels a bit clunky to me, but I don't know how to reword it better. Any suggestions? --216.165.248.21 (talk) 15:02, 4 May 2016 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 20 June 2016[edit]
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Original text: Unfortunately, the Star Dream becomes self-aware as result of Susie removing the helmet Haltmann used to control it.
Suggested edit: Unfortunately, Star Dream infects and takes over Haltmann's body as a result of Susie removing the control helmet Haltmann used. When Susie attempts to use the helmet herself, Star Dream lashes out, possibly because it deems her unfit as an Administrator. Players later will learn that Susie was created by Star Dream, which implies Star Dream programmed her specifically in case Star Dream is in danger or needs to override its current Administrator.
Original text: Star Dream then announces that all organic life-forms are obstacles in the HWC's business plan, assimilates Haltmann, and embarks on a mission of intergalactic destruction.
Suggested edit: As Star Dream begins to absorb and assimilate Haltmann's mind and soul, it interprets Haltmann's wish for prosperity to extremes and identifies life as a greater liability than asset to the company. Thus, Star Dream embarks on a mission of intergalactic genocide.
Original text: After defeating Haltmann, Star Dream requests Meta Knight prove himself to it
Suggested edit: After defeating Haltmann, Star Dream acknowledges Meta Knight as a possible successive Administrator, and requests Meta Knight to prove himself to it
Original text: Susanna was indeed revived as his robot secretary Susie by the Star Dream, but it appears neither of them ever learned the truth.
Suggested appended edit: There is a hint that Susie is aware of her creation (but not inherently her origin), as she refers to Star Dream as the Mother Computer.
The following regex is suggested to be run across the whole document (or do it manually) for grammar correction:
Original text: the Star Dream
Replace with: Star Dream
Star Dream is referred to as an entity/being and as such is not prefaced with "the", following how Star Dream is referenced in the story as well.
0x90erator (talk) 15:34, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
Not done: The page's protection level has changed since this request was placed. You should now be able to edit the page yourself. If you still seem to be unable to, please reopen the request with further details. — Andy W. (talk · ctb) 06:11, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 22 June 2016[edit]
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Add {{Pp-semi}} template.
--186.84.46.227 (talk) 03:25, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
- Done, but this protection combination is very odd and possibly unsanctioned. — Andy W. (talk · ctb) 05:11, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Galacta Knight[edit]
Is Galacta Knight male or female? I can't tell. Please respond, because most people don't. Nathan L. Ronco 04:20, 12 February 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by NATHANBETH (talk • contribs)
- Galacta Knight is referred to as male in Super Star Ultra, that should help you clear your thoughts up. 46.161.206.92 (talk) 23:57, 31 July 2018 (UTC)
Is the "Female antagonists" category really neccessary?[edit]
We all know that Susie is actually the sidekick to President Haltmann, a male character, and the final boss Star Dream is genderless. She is however, a much active threat than her boss, but is this category neccessary? 46.161.206.92 (talk) 23:54, 31 July 2018 (UTC)
referencing Jun Ishikawa (composer)[edit]
I tried adding a reference to Jun Ishikawa (composer) in the Composer section of the INFOBOX, but i can't figure out how the hell to do that. If i just put [[]] around it then it references the author, but if i type Jun Ishikawa then the pipe makes it sᵃd, and format wrong.
how do i do this :( Derpyhoi (talk) 14:11, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
Local description[edit]
Currently, “2016 video game for the 3DS” is the local description. The “for the 3DS” part should be removed as it is redundant information, but I do not know how to remove it. Blighterzero (talk) 12:04, 11 October 2023 (UTC)
"Beam attack" listed at Redirects for discussion[edit]
The redirect Beam attack has been listed at redirects for discussion to determine whether its use and function meets the redirect guidelines. Readers of this page are welcome to comment on this redirect at Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion/Log/2024 March 21 § Beam attack until a consensus is reached. Utopes (talk / cont) 02:59, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
Plot[edit]
There are not three clones of dedede, instead there is only one that splits into three later (however if you count the pause screen for the 2.0 variant there are far more than three clones) - some bored kid at school 13:55, 28 March 2024 (UTC)