Talk:Leah Penniman

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suggested sources[edit]

rolling stone

news10 not entirely sure if this is a strong news source, but its independent from the author at least.

yesmagazine.org again not entirely sure about the strength of this source

Hudson Valley Magazine

etc - via yahoo search. Edaham (talk) 09:29, 3 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Clean up targets[edit]

Remove all primary sources - There's enough on the subject of this article written in independent sources
Rewrite the Soul Fire Farm section as prose rather than a list. As a list it sounds too much like corporate copy or advertising
Further establish notability of the subject. Based on a search, the subject has an impact beyond the scope of the business to which the subject belongs. This should be made clear in the article.