Talk:Schwartz Center for Compassionate Healthcare

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This page is an outline. Soon it is going to be edited by members of the Schwartz Center organization. After that I'll look it over and make sure it is unbiased and Wikified as well as I can make it. After that I'd be *very* much obliged if a few people could take a look at it, top to bottom.

Huzzah!

Dak06 (talk) 13:40, 20 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

What would be most helpful is if you could use as many WP:Independent sources (like a newspaper article about the organization) as possible. That helps us know that the information is what the world at large thinks about the organization, rather than just what the marketing department wants to be said. WhatamIdoing (talk) 17:44, 4 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

July 2016 edits[edit]

I initially reverted some recent additions to the article which are clearly copied from the subjects website, but even after reverting to an earlier version just about everything I see is traceable back to the organization's website. I'm good apparentI've pared it back to a bare minimum rather than simply blow it away but if this article is to existed needs to be written by independent editors using multiple independent sources.--S Philbrick(Talk) 21:23, 11 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Sphilbrick: I've taken a hatchet to the article, but also added actually verifiable and notable text which the authors somehow decided not to include. It reads much more like a Wikipedia article and less like a press release now. --Slashme (talk) 18:54, 12 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Slashme: Thanks, looks much better.--S Philbrick(Talk) 19:33, 12 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]