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There are many instances within the article of getting into people's heads, such as "Lij Seifu Mikael was unpublished, prolific writer who enjoyed writing ...". Even if this phrase was sourced, it would be iffy because it's mind reading. There are other similar constructs with "enjoy", too. Other issues in phrasing: "very experienced", "extremely loyal", "a bitter struggle he led with valor, extreme bravery". Elsewhere: "Seifu, now a very bitter man". These editorializing words need to be removed, but additionally the writing has the overall tone of taking the side of Mikael or wanting to represent his actions more favorably. These issues are not serious, but the article definitely needs additional in-text citations. fdsTalk 17:59, 15 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
