Talk:Submerged-arc furnace for phosphorus production

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Resistance[edit]

I de-linked resistance in the phrase "electric and flow resistance", because the "resistance" page is a disambiguation page. I linked electrical resistance later in the paragraph, but I don't know what if anything to do about "flow resistance," which is related to drag (physics) or perhaps to viscosity. -Arch dude (talk) 21:41, 13 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Review[edit]

I think the article is very good, and the review tag can be removed. SA mtm (talk) 14:52, 29 October 2010 (UTC)--SA mtm (talk) 14:52, 29 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Copyedit for May 2012 drive[edit]

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I made some copy edits, mostly to remove run-on sentences. I also re-organized the subparts to be a bit more logical and connected. Some additional wiki pages on the chemistry of phosphate intermediary compounds may be well received (hence the red internal links). Lastly, there are several informational commercial links that could be added, but I didn't want to appear to promote one company over another. Thoughts? Gofigure41 03:39, 26 May 2012 (UTC)

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